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Keith Mars
Keith was born in a small tropical town two hours south of Los Angeles where he got his start in the Police Department. He was the son of a decorated small town Sheriff.
Keith started to date Lianne after he moved to Los Angeles when his father got a new job. They split up for a bit, then they got back together just before graduation, and got married soon after their 20th birthday. At the time, they had moved back and forth between Neptune and Los Angeles. He had gotten into the police academy after graduation where he got a job as a police detective.
He was a police detective someone leaked tapes of a crime scene of the murdered girl, Madeline Swanson. The father of the murdered girl had demanded that he be kicked out of the police force; my protege had been promoted to my old position.
Later that year, Keith had accumulated enough capital to start up a Private Eye business. Soon after his venture started Lianne left him and their daughter, Veronica in the middle of the night as she apparently couldn't handle the loss in income and decided that she needed the bottle to survive. Keith was left alone to raise the daughter he thought that they had shared. You could believe the shock when the doctor told them that they weren't a compatible bone marrow match and that they actually had no relation to one another.
After they found that out he had Leukemia, they decided that it was best to hire Weevil to go on stakeouts with Veronica and keep her out of trouble with the different types of cases that she pursued.
When Keith found out that the girl that he had raised was in a relationship with the ex-biker and ex-leader of the Latino biker gang, he wasn't thrilled, but came to realise that Weevil had grown up around people in the gang, but had actually grown up since the start of the relationship.. Keith was scared that Weevil would get Veronica mixed up in his past.
Keith had known Weevil since he was first picked up for hotwiring a car at the age of twelve. He was hanging around with people that were a bad influence and had called them friends. It took him awhile, but he soon realized that Weevil just wanted some figure to look up to for the manly father role model he had lacked since the death of his parents. He'd never known his grandfather as he had died before Weevil was born.
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