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'prim mum said we need to get out the house so she can clean out the house so we don't get in the way'. I shout up to my sister.

'okay be down in a minute, just need to put my shoes on'. She says as she's running down the stairs trying to put her vans on.

'bye mum love you'. Shouts prim to mum.

'love you too'. She shouts back 'be back before tea'.

We go to the park and meet up with my friends finnick, annie, johanna, gale. Gale and johanna are dating and so are annie and finnick.

'should we go through the forest and make a den', asks finnick

'yeah why not' we all reply. We get half way and prim is crying

'I don't want to go I want to go home and help mum'.

'ok prim, go home you know the way', I tell her

'I want you to come with me', I just laugh at her

'stop being a baby prim your 12 years old stop crying and go home you wouldn't like it in the forst anyway just go home and save us the trouble'.

'we'll see you at home prim', says annie.

They all start walking off. 'bye prim, love you'. I say as I watch her walk off in the distance towards home. But only if I knew. She never made home. Well at least I don't think she did.

Five years later…

I stand there looking at my sisters missing poster. They never found her body. But they say the longer they disappear the less chance of being alive, but surely they would of found her body if not.

I've just go back from college. I'm now 21. Prim would be 17. Now finishing high school. But she never made it to graduation. To be honest I think the police force have given up on her case because there has not been any updates or leads in what, 4 years.

I knock on my parent's house and my dad answers the door and gives me a hug. I go upstairs and spot prim's bedroom door open.

I go in and see that nothing has been moved and nothing has been put away. I notice prims cat buttercup asleep on her bed. I can't believe that thing is still alive.

'your mother won't let me touch the stuff, it's like she thinks prim's gonna be coming home in the future the same age'. Says dad behind me.

'yeah, I think she's gone as well'. I say back to him 'but there's still a feeling that she may be alive somewhere in this world'.

I take stroll through the village and notice some new police officers around. Some look a bit dodgy.

Then I see finnick, in a police outfit.

'if it isn't fish boy in a uniform'. I say behind him.

'oh if it isn't kitty, back from college'.

'never thought I'd see the day finnick odair got put in uniform again, and obeyed it',

'yeah, I'm a police officer now',

'how's that working out for you',

'by that do you mean, prim, well guess what, I'm the deputy of prim's case, I only got deputy because I was there that day'.

'really, how's annie',

'nackered and swollen, being pregnant has taken a toll on her',

'boy or girl?'

'boy, what's up with you, I haven't seen you since my wedding last year'.

'nothing really' except at the wedding I had a one night stand with your best man. I feel like saying but stop myself.

I'm in the super market and I bump into some one. I look up and recognize her.

'well if it isn't brainless coming out of her hiding place'.

'hey johanna', she hits me in the arm.

'you turn up after all this time and you say 'hey johanna' she shouts at me.

'well what else am I suppose to say'.

'I don't know, I think we need a group get together soon before you go back',

'I'm not going back, I'm staying and helping my dad look after my mum, get over prim',

'have you seen the memorial for your sister in the middle of town, sometimes I still think it's our fault that she went missing',

'johanna you know that's not the case, we weren't to know someone was going to take her or not, so stop blaming ourselves its not going to get us anywhere let the police force sort it out'.

'you mean finnick and peeta, the deputy and head of the case', I flinch when she said peeta because he was the best man at his wedding and we both got a bit drunk and one thing lead to another and yeah stuff happened.

'what do you mean, peeta is the head of the case?'

'yeah, since the wedding he's been dead set on finding out what happened to prim because he believes she's alive and out there and keeps telling people not to lose help, and even thought your dads a police officer peeta had been a better help than your dad on that case because he has more determination and courage and It takes a lot to keep this case going and peeta has done that'.

'so since the wedding, peeta has been going crazy about this case and no one thought to tell me nit even my parents told me',

'to be honest I thought your parents had already told you which is why I didn't say anything'.

Later that night I lay in bed pondering over the fact peeta is the reason this case is still going and dad is getting a break and able to help my mum. I owe peeta my life. May be he is only doing this because of what happened at the wedding.

I can't get over what happened, I dreaded leaving that morning because we had made a connection and we never talked about it because I freaked out and left before he woke in hopes that he was too drunk to remember what had happened.

Now I have to face him again.

The next morning I leave to got to gale and madge's house. I can't believe all my friends managed to stay as couples without any problems. It amazes me.

I knock on the door and madge answers.

'katniss', she shrieks

'long time no see', I joke at her and she laughs.

'come in' we go in and sit on the sofa. 'so what's up with your life then everdeen',

'well I just got back yesterday ant then find out finnick and peeta are leading the case and the fact the case is still going amazes me',

'why wouldn't it still be going, everyone loved your sister, and everyone wants the person who done it sentenced to life because your sister was lovely and no harm to any one and was the light of everyone she had met's life'.

'yeah, I just don't understand it all, surely they would have found her body by now if she was dead',

'kat don't think like that, think of It like, they haven't found her body so there's a chance of her still being alive'.

'I try to but it doesn't work when you are living with your parents and you are the reason she got kidnapped and most probably killed because you wanted to hang out with your friends, I just think she died hating me because I called her a baby and told her to go home, I just can't help but feel like that',

'listen she loved you, you protected her and everything'.

'and look how well that worked out I couldn't protect her from the dangers of the woods or people'.

I'm just dreading the day I meet peeta mellark again, more than anything.

Thanks for reading guys give me a heads up on the story so far

~mack