Hey Guys, its here, the first chapter rewritten I hope you like it better than the old one. I know that one was horrifying for me to read

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"Thump, thump, thump." That was all that was heard on this almost empty street. "Thump, thump, thump" was the sounds the shoes made of the only person on this street. A singular teen with raven colored locks that happen to have a blue color in the light. He walked down the street enjoying the peace and quiet. He never really got them very often. It was usually disrupted by one thing, or, like today, a group of people.
" Is that Sasuke?"
"I don't know. Is it?"
"I think so."
"Ya! It is!"
"Ohhhh Saasuukkee!"
"Sasuke! Over here. Where are you going? We are over here! Come on over please!"
Fangirls, oh how he hated fangirls. Annoying pests the lot of them. They were always following him and usually there was some already there when he went places. Some even went into the guys locker room as he was getting dressed one day. Thank God the P.E. teacher was still there otherwise he would have been mobbed...Again.
The raven sped up trying to loose them pondering on why they followed him and only him. Okay, he was the younger brother of Itachi Uchiha, was on the football team, had one of the best grades in the school, had the pale skin and bad boy look/vibe about him, but so what.
Gaara no Sabaku, an aquantance of his, had all of those except the Itachi as an older brother and he didn't get mobbed. Maybe it was the killer intent that practically oozed off of him almost 24/7.
'Yeah, that's most likely why they actually go out of their way to avoid him. He can be slightly scary at times.' muzed a now slightly smirking Sasuke.
"Oooohhhh Sasuke..." called out one of the stalk.. I mean fangirls.
'If it was meant to be seductive she massively failed. It made me want to gag.' Speeding up his pace to a fast walk, Sasuke continued to try to avoid and possiblely get rid of his tails. They all kept pace with him and some even started speeding up to catch up with him. Not having that anytimes soon the raven put on a burst of speed, running down the sidewalk as the girls chased him calling his name and asking multiple things like if he would go out with them, why he was running, and asking him if he wanted to "study" with them.
After a while he slowed down to catch his breath and from across the street a girl that he knew was four years older than him called out. "Heeey Sasuke, why don't you hang out with me for a while? I'm sure I can show you a good time."
While talking, she lifted up her mini-skirt to just below her crotch, which wasn't very far up, and batted her eye lashes in a "provacative" manner.
Bolting again , wishing he could shrub his brain because of the imagery he was just given, Sasuke ran for another two blocks and turned the corner.
"Omph!"
Sasuke landed hard on the ground, knocking over whatever he had run into. Or at least he thought it was the ground. Looking down, instead of the cement, it was a person he was on top of.
'Oh great of all the people in the world it had to be him.' grouzed the raven in the back of his head. "Him" was the city's own knuckle-headed, hyperactive, blonde haired idiot whose parents had disappeared when he was little. The one, the only Naruto Uzumaki.

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Naruto laid there dazed from the impact and wondered what the weight on top of him was. Snapping out of his daze, he noticed it was a person, more importantly it was Mister Emo himself, Sasuke Uchiha.
"What the hell? Get off me Teme!"
Sasuke rolled off of the picture of Nazi ideology and shot back, "Well YOU should have been watching where YOU were going and maybe this wouldn't have happened, you Baka!"
Naruto watched as Sasuke looked around and suddenly jumped up. Sasuke had gotten a panicked look on his face and bolted down the street. Wondering what had Mister Stoic so panicked, Naruto looked around and noticed members of the Sasuke fan club heading towards the direction Sasuke had bolted off in. The girls were calling out the raven's name and asking if he was alright and if he wanted them to punish the idiot for him.
Eventually they ran past Naruto, a few spitting on the ground near him or even on him, and continued following their "leader" in their messed up game. The blonde got to his feet then looked down at a thunk that sounded from around his feet. On the ground was a sleek black and navy blue cell phone. Picking it up, Naruto pondered Sasuke's run in.
'Stupid Bastard. He should have watched where he was running. Serves the fucker right to be chased by those crazy hoes' thought Naruto smugly.
Inspecting the phone, he saw that it was a flip phone and slider duo and it actually looked pretty old and used. Just as the blonde went to flip it open, the phone went off with a text. Checking who it was, Naruto saw that it was from a person called "Ni-san".
Finally opening it, Naruto read what had been sent.
"Hey Sasuke, I'm going to be in town in two weeks to visit for about a week. see u then."
'So this is Sasuke's phone? Hehehehehehehehe. Lets see what he has on here...' walking home Naruto started plotting Sasuke's soon to be torture.

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so how was it better right send a review and give me time and I might rewrite the next chapter