I'm a first time author in the Camp Rock category. Two years back, I tried writing for Gilmore Girls and Hannah Montana, and I wasn't really dedicated, so I just sort of took a hiatus, and suddenly, deleted my stories, and changed my pen name, and am having a fresh start.
We're doing a poetry unit in school, and I wanted to see how I could do. I wrote this just now during a half hour break I took from working on a future one shot, and I think it's actually okay. So just tell me what you think, you can tell I purposefully rhymed, and it just kind of tells a cute story.
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Disclaimer: I don't own Camp Rock, or anyone involved with it. The close I came to being near Camp Rock was me and my best friend begging our parents to let us head up to Canada and be extras. And we obviously, well, didn't. So, yes, just to say, I don't own a thing.
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She showed up on her first day
To Camp Rock.
She wore her style her own way
Bright colors down to her socks.
This was an Abercrombie based camp, she saw
No one wanted a change
Tess Tyler made that basically a law
And no one but Caitlyn found that strange.
So Caitlyn Gellar was made an outcast for being who wanted
Even though she was somewhat nice
She was endlessly taunted,
As her style and demeanor would not suffice.
A month flew by
And at Camp no one talked
To the girl who lay in her cabin and cry
Who hated being mocked.
She mixed beats well
Her voice was a sweet sound
Tess Tyler gave her hell
She crushed Caitlyn to the ground.
One day, in the middle of the heat
A boy showed up ready
To start to appreciate Caitlyn's beat
And she fell for him already
They met at lunch
He complimented her converse
She never had the urge to punch
The boy who made her summer go in reverse.
Friends first, besties second
It took a week for them to go steady
It was his nerves, she reckoned,
But Caitlyn Gellar was finally ready.
She stepped out,
Into the spotlight
She couldn't have done it without,
Nate's smile so bright.
The duo tried their best
To produce a new sound
At Final Jam, they impressed,
Everyone was spellbound
They took home the gold
That wonderful night
Nate's real prize was his girl he could hold
Caitlyn's prize was his kiss, much to her delight.
Unique was a nice word
To talk about
The girl who never went with Tess's herd
And who Nate couldn't live without.
This summer had been
Superior, by far
But everything was just about to begin
As long as the two stay who they are.
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Okay, so just review and tell me what you thought, I know it was kind of cheesy, but I thought it wasn't the absolute worst thing I've ever written. Please, R and R, just to give some constructive criticism.