Hey guys, Secret Marauderette here. I finally got around to writing a fanfic. I got a lot of the idea from PrincessEarth's The Marauders and The Rogues but I promise I'm not taking her story and putting my characters in it. Hopefully this will have a lot of Death Eater action. It's in Lily's POV so tell me what you think.
I woke up to my alarm going off. Stupid thing. I ought to Avada it, for waking me up at such an ungodly hour. *grumble grumble*
"Lily!" Petunia screeched. What a hypocrite! And she says I'm the freak. No normal person can make a sound like that. No human being should have that much resemblance to a horse either, now that I think about it.
"Lily! You're going to miss the train to that freak school of yours! I've waited all summer for this day! Get your unnatural arse down here!" Petunia yelled up the stairs. I wonder if Hogsmeade has a Banshee on recording. Then I could make Petunia hear the sound of her own whinny.
"I'm coming! Shut up before you wake the dead!" I shouted back down to her as I got out of my bed. I stretched my arms above my head, allowing my tank top to unwrinkle itself. I looked at the clock with my elbows bent on top of my head. 10:36! Good Godric! I'm gonna be late!
It was raining outside and kind of chilly, so I ran to my dresser and threw on a pair of jeans that made my arse look fantastic if I do say so myself. And, after rummaging through my drawers, my favorite emerald green turtleneck that more than complimented my eyes, which were close to the same shade. I then rushed to my vanity, and used a clip to pin my hair up, letting the rest of my shoulder-blade length red hair fan across the top of the clip, while my side bangs framed my heart-shaped face. I hurriedly put on my 3-inch black, square-heeled boots under the bottoms of my jeans. I quickly swiped on some mascara and my favorite vanilla cupcake flavored lip gloss, which just made my lips shiny, since I could never get lipstick right, thus resulting in me looking like a two-sickle hooker!
"Lily!" Petunia shrieked. I ran down the stairs and started walking past her.
"You coming or what? Mum's got the car running. Global warming and all that you know." And with that, I strode out the door and slammed it behind me.
A/N- I should totally just end it here. But I won't because I wanna give you guys really long chapters so keep reading. You're welcome.
We arrived at the platform at 10:55. Damn it all!
"Bye Mum! Love you!" I kissed her cheek as I rushed through the barrier.
"Bye sweetheart! Owl me soon!" she called as I made my way through the gateway to the magic world.
I practically jumped onto the train as the whistle blew. Good thing Jamie was in the hall.
"Lily!" she shouted as she ran and hug tackled me. "I missed you so much! Don't ever leave me again!" she pretended to sob hysterically.
"That, my friends, is as hot as you can go. Other than me, of course."
I looked past my overzealous friend and saw the Marauders. The Marauders were a group of pranksters that consisted of James Potter, Sirius Black, Remus Lupin, and for some unfathomable reason Peter Pettigrew.
Peter Pettigrew was a 'pathetic, spineless, pitiful, sorry excuse for a Gryffindor' as my good friend Riley would say. He was plump to say the least, and not half as good looking as the other three. He had short blonde hair and watery, beady blue eyes. His nose and teeth reminded me of a rat to be brutally honest.
Remus Lupin is a good friend of mine, but not as good a friend as my girls. He and I share a brother/sister type of relationship. He has golden brown eyes as well as sandy blonde hair mixed with some brown and gray that surrounded his handsome face. He has gray hairs at the radical age of 17 because he has a disease, or rather an infection, called lycanthropy. That's fancy speak for 'the man who might as well be an older brother to me is a bloody werewolf'. Yes, Remus Lupin is a werewolf. But he honestly is just about the most decent person you'll ever meet.
Sirius Black is the typical bad boy of the group. He has shoulder length hair as black as his name, though not greasy and stringy like Snape's, oh no, his is somewhat wavy and full of volume. He has dark gray eyes that are just so captivating. And nicely chiseled features. He has a beater's build so his body is definitely a big part in his appeal. Sirius Black is a, for lack of a better word, man-whore. Though, I guess it has a lot to do with him looking like God's gift to women, thus resulting in the naïve girls of Hogwarts throwing themselves at him. Though, they really should expect it when he dumps them after he's snogged them a time or two, but, alas, every week you can hear some poor soul in the girl's toilet sobbing her heart out. I think he does feel remorse though, for whenever I see him walk past said toilet and he hears the cries of a broken heart, his features rearrange themselves to a guilt ridden expression. He also has a very vibrant personality. I've never seen him turn his back on his friends, so he seems like a very loyal person. You know, when I think of him, I think of Jamie for some curious reason. Hmmm, I wonder if they would make a good couple. One thing's for sure, if they do get together and he breaks her heart, me, and Charlie and Riley I'm sure, are going to break his gorgeous face.
Last, but most definitely not least, is James Potter, the ringmaster of this little group. He may not be as fetching as Sirius, but by no means is James Potter less than striking. He has incredibly messy black hair that sometimes hides his absolutely dreamy, swoon worthy hazel eyes. I'm not even kidding! They're like pools of butterscotch that you just want to get lost and drown in. He plays chaser on the Gryffindor Quidditch Team so he is by no means the scrawny second year I once knew. He is muscular like Sirius, only his is more of lean muscle. Mind you, Sirius is not the Hulk, but his biceps are likely the same length around as my head. James was my sworn enemy up until last year. He seemed to really mature, and we talked a bit. We're kind of friends now, which, I must admit, is easier than hating him. The girls and I are now, sort of teamed up with the Marauders, and its lots of fun.
Sirius had spoken, always the arrogant prick we all know and love.
"What's it to you Black? I can't tackle my best friend?" Jamie retorted as she rolled off me and looked up to face them.
"Oh, you can do that all you want Ryland, as long as I'm there to watch." Sirius told her.
"You're a pervert Sirius, you know that right?" I told him as I helped Jamie up.
"Only for you, Lily darling." he said as he engulfed me in a bone crushing hug.
"I missed you too", I managed to choke out, "can I have my airways back please?" he let go.
"What, no hug, 'I missed you', for me?" James joked. So I turned around, smiled, and hugged him.
He released me but kept an arm around my shoulders as we turned and saw Sirius with his arms out towards Jamie.
She glared at him, he pouted and gave her puppy dog eyes.
"Those don't work on me, you know." she informed him.
"Pleasey please Jamie! I missed you so much!" he pouted some more, just looking so hopeless. Jamie laughed and wrapped her arms around his torso in a hug. He returned it with vigor. I'm pretty sure I saw her eyes pop out a bit.
"Watch the ribs, dude, the ribs!" she wheezed. The rest of us laughed as he let the poor, slowly taking on a bluish tint, Jamie go. We then walked down the hall looking for a compartment.
"The Imps are down here." Jamie told us as she led us down the train. She stopped us at a compartment near the back and opened the door.
Now, you're probably wondering who the Imps are. Well, the Imps consist of me, Jamie, Charlie, and Riley.
Riley Voegele has wavy brown hair down to her chest and high cheekbones. She has chocolate brown eyes that are always 'Impish' (Bad pun, sorry, couldn't resist…though I probably should've…) she was about 5'6 I guess, just average. And she has the best sense of humor out of all of us. She is also the craziest, next to Jamie of course.
Charlotte Hart, or Charlie, has long wavy blonde hair and bluish-green eyes, and is the quiet, sensitive one of our group. She doesn't get mad very easily, and doesn't really have that bad of a temper. Which is always good for Jamie and I, considering Riley just laughs it off. She's average height, like Riley and such a sweetheart.
Jamilynn Ryland is my closest friend. I love the other girls a lot, and they are my best friends but Jamie is the first I turn to. She has red hair, like me, only hers is naturally red, but she didn't like the color, so she died it blood red. Sigh. Oh, well. It's kind of short and uneven, but it looks good on her. She has these blue eyes that can be gray and navy, her eyes always remind me of the ocean. She's tall, at 5'8 and has a very sarcastic sense of humor. But when you use sarcasm on her, she takes it literally. It's like she's is the only one who is allowed to use it. She has a temper just like me, but more on the violent side. She is dangerously loyal. If some Slytherin calls me a mud blood, we have to hold her back or she will knock them out. I lost count of how many Slytherins we have saved from a trip to the Hospital Wing. She plays chaser on the House team so she's pretty athletic too. She's always up for a dare, that's Gryffindor right there especially when we play with the Marauders *cough Sirius cough*
"Hey guys! Look who I found! Ta-da!" Jamie announced to the occupants of the compartment.
Inside, Charlie was reading a book and Riley was poking Charlie with a straw. Aren't we just an interesting bunch?
"Ugh, finally! Riley won't leave me alone" Charlie complained as we entered the compartment, Marauders in tow.
"Riley, stop poking Charlie." I scolded my friend as we all sat down. Riley pouted and harrumphed at me.
"What? I'm proving my bestfriendship." she said indignantly.
"How exactly is poking Charlie while she's reading proving your friendship?" Remus asked her.
"Strangers stab you in the front. Friends stab you in the back. Boyfriends stab you in the heart, but best friends only poke each other with straws." she informed us proudly.
"Notice you said they stab each other and Charlie isn't poking back. I think that means it's a one-sided 'bestfriendship'" Jamie pointed out. Riley gasped scandalously.
"Charlie! How could you? I thought what we had was special!" she fake sobbed. See what I meant by crazy? Charlie rolled her eyes.
"Hello Marauders." she greeted.
"Oh dear Charlotte! It just wasn't the same without you! I was miserable!" Sirius 'sobbed' throwing himself at poor Charlie.
"I'm so sure Sirius." she said dryly as she pushed him off of her. "Hey Lils, don't you, Remus, James, and I have somewhere to be right about now?" she asked us. Dammit! Prefect's meeting! How could I have forgotten?
"Right. Best be going then. Be back in a bit. Come on James." I said as I pulled him up with my hand. We then headed back to the front of the train side by side.
We finally approached a compartment with the words:
Heads Compartment
James Potter (Head Boy)
Lily Evans (Head Girl)
And went inside to see a bunch of fifth, sixth, and seventh years from various houses. Charlie and Remus sat down, being the Gryffindor prefects for seventh year. And the meeting began. (I just don't want to waste my finger power writing the boring prefect's meeting so change scene back to the original compartment with everyone in it and everyone is dressed.)
We were all laughing at something Sirius had said when the compartment door slid open to reveal Bellatrix Black, Penelope Parkinson, Severus Snape, and Alecto and Amycus carrow.
"Well look at this. It's three blood traitors, four half-blood's, and a mudblood." Black sneered, as the other snakes laughed.
Jamie stood up and took a step towards her. But luckily, Sirius grabbed her arm. Parkinson didn't fail to miss it.
"Ooh. Look at this Bella. You're filth of a cousin actually has a pureblood girlfriend. Wonder how long this will last." she trilled.
"No one pushed your buzzer Parkinson." I told her as I too stood up.
She leered at me, "And what exactly is that supposed to mean Mudblood?"
"It means 'shut the hell up, bitch'" I translated for her.
The marauders and the Imps looked shocked to say the least. I never was much for cursing actually at people. Jamie just looked proud. Aww.
"What did you just say to me?" she asked trying to look dangerous. Jamie answered for me.
"Didn't you hear? She called you a bitch. Or are you deaf as well as Undesirable 1?"
"You better watch yourself Ryland. That mouth of yours will get you into trouble one of these days" Alecto told her. Sirius stood up next to Jamie and flexed his biceps as he crossed his arms.
"You lot are going to be in trouble if you don't leave, like, now." he threatened. He can be very persuasive with those arm muscles of his. They sneered at us in contempt one last time before evacuating the small room.
Okay, so that was the first chapter. Tell me if it's any good and if I should continue.
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