Chapter 1:Know Pain,Intro
(Ok so lets just saaay that after pain destoryed most of the leaf village naruto did not appear, just so the story makes more sense, Anyways, review comment do whatever you want to do, also this is my first real fanfic so be gentle, and my grammar might be bad. )
Shortly after the attack on Konohagakure Pain and his six paths returned to the akatsuki hideout, "Madara, I have completed the task just as you asked, Regretfully though i did not find the jinchuriki, Sources tell me he is on the toad mountain."
"Then you know where to go next now don't you?" Madara said coldly. Pain nodded "Yes, as soon as i find out where that is I will go" "Good" Madara said.
Just then pains new animal path,Chikusodo,Walked in "Madara-Sama, I have found something you might be interested in." She bowed as she said his name, This one had always seemed different to Madara, She seemed independent in some way, as if Nagato did not fully control her, Not to mention she wasnt exactly hard to look at.
"Ah Chiku-Chan, What is it?" She handed him a scroll "I found this after I killed that pesky leaf interrogator, Aparently its information on the last animal path, But there is also information on the leaf in there, they do not hide secrets well.." Madara smiled at her, of the few times he did smile most were directed at her, "Thankyou Chiku-Chan, I'll take a look immediatly."
She smiled back at him and walked out of the room, The deva path, Yahiko, Only glared at her "She is the one I cannot control... although you know that already, I can sense it Madara, You like her.." Madara gave him a glare that said "Shutup or ill kill you", "Silence Pain, I'll not have you spreading such rumors, She is meerly a tool of mine" He snapped. "Sure she is.." Pain said and walked out.
Was he right? Did Madara truly feel something for Chiku, who was reallly no more than a dead body brought to life, The very thought of it upset his stomach. *Best not to think about it for now* He told himself as he walked back to his room and lay on his bed, trying to get some sleep.
(Sorry its short just testing the water, do you like it?)