Hi! this is one of the first fanfics i have posted so could you please tell me what you think? i'd love the critisism. thanks! oh and some of the charectersare most likley going to be quite ooc to begin with so, so sorry about that. bu i'm going to try and make soundwave more into the soundwave we all know and love in later chapters. yet agin so sorry!
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"You can't go Lyrical! Please don't go!" Soundwave pleaded me. We were on the outskirts of Iacon

"I have to go Soundwave. You should know that. I don't want to go but I can't disobey orders from a superior officer." I said softly energon tears running down my face from my optics. "I really don't want to leave you or the children but I want them to grow up safe without worrying about them being offlined." More tears began running down my face plates. Soundwave looked at the energon tears running down my face and pulled me into him wiping the tears off with a thumb. I buried my face in his chassis as he spoke.

"I know you must go but is it a crime to want my sparkmate to stay with me? I just don't want you to leave me and the children. When will you come back to us? When will we see you again?" Soundwave asked me his voice still a monotone but his emotions pouring over our bond.

"Within a vorn if the mission goes as planned. You do know I'll have to take Ratbat and Buzzsaw with me. They're still too young to be away from their carrier. But promise me one thing Soundwave." I told him poking him in the chassis and glaring at him through my tears.

"Anything." Soundwave said nodding and I smiled looking into his purple optics which were the same colour as his spark seeing as he was a neutral.

"If I don't return within a vorn don't do anything stupid or anything that could potentially put you and the children in harm's way. Promise me Soundwave." I told him staring into his optics but stayed in his arms while more energon tears ran down my face plates.

"I promise Lyrical. I love you." Soundwave whispered into my audio receptor while he retracted his face mask and kissed my lips which made our elder children groan and made us chuckle.

"And I love you." I said kissing him back. I pulled away from him and looked into his optics again sadly.

"Goodbye Soundwave."
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