hey guys this is my first story tell me what you think and I do not own Kingdom Hearts.
Prologue
It was mid June night when it happened. Riku and Sora we're playing on the beach when all the sudden they saw two stars falling from the and see what happened when they got there they seen 2 girls laying there on the beach. One of the girls ha long purple hair her skin was paleand was wearing a blue long blue dress. She was all so wearing crescent moon pendant necklace and a Sun pendant to her was a younger looking girl with reddish hair and was wearing a white top with pink skirt and she was also pale. When the first girl woke up the frist thing Riku noticed was her sky blue. "Oh what the blue eyed girl. " You fell from the sky. Said Sora." "Oh my goodness that sounds painful. She said looking the opposite why from Sora."hey I'm over said" really it all look dark to said." "Sora I think she Riku. " you might be on to something there any way I'm Mai did you guys see any a girl about the age of four with red hair around." Said Mia." I'm right next to you Mia how your hear. Said the little girl. " I'm ok still blind but good Kira. Said Mia. Where you guys come from? Sora said loudly and exited like. For another planet. Mia said loudly back. Really both the boy say. Yes but it's gone Kira. Mia was hugging her when. So you don't have a place to said . No both the girl's said. Then you can stay with my family until we find you a new Riku. You know what we'll accept that mia still looking the wrong way. Riku then known not only did they get new friends but they have an adventure ahead of them.
Well there it is tell me what you think and what I need to too improve on. Blazingfire