Ok I know this is bad but it comes from my heart; I base all my poems on real life experiences. I've been trying to get better at it but can never seem to grasp it. Please review and be truthful. I would like to know where I messed up, and where I need to improve. Enjoy!
Shattered Life Renewed
I'm standing in the rain
I'm drowning in my pain
No one there to hold me
No one there to scold me
My shattered broken life remains
All the memories I contain
You cannot see me through the darkness
You try to find me in the blackness
All the pain we that we have fared
I still cherish all we shared
That old fork in the road
The day I gave you all I stowed
In my secret heart of glass
I knew the time had come alas
We are young
But we are strong
We both know that this is wrong
No one can change the tune that rung
So fate shall have to try again
To keep us in this game
Someone wise once told me this
"If you set your mind to it
You can accomplish anything"
I'm going to blow away the clouds
I'm going to stop this rain
I'll have you to hold me
You would never scold me
I swept away the shattered pieces
And now have happy memories
The darkness cannot live
When the sun is shining bright
No more pain
No more shame
The road ahead is clear
The road ahead is full of cheer
Life can start anew
When the grass is full of dew