I'm bored stiff so I'm going to re-write this story, adding more detail and correcting as many mistakes as I can. I can't tell you if I'll end up doing the entire story so for now; I'm just going to wing it!
Summary (incase you missed it):
A new character named Kat and her friend Tanya travel through time to pursue a wish. They end up meeting Inuyasha and Kenshin. Sparks fly when Kat begins to have feelings for the characters but will she be able to tell them how she feels? A/U COMPLETER&R
Well, here's the first chapter to Shattered Dreams and Broken Hearts! I hope you like it!
PLEASE REVIEW!!!
Shattered Dreams and Broken Hearts
Chapter 1 (prologue-ish)
Sunlight pokes through the leaves of the surrounding trees and coats a red headed violet-eyed teenaged boy.
It had just snowed and with each breath comes a puff of frost.
His shoulders slump and his limbs begin to grow numb from the knelling in the snow.
His hair forms a curtain around his eyes, hiding his emotions from view.
He cradles the body of his love; the only thing that mattered to him in this world is dead... and he killed her.
The snow around them is stained crimson and their clothes drip the thick red liquid too.
His face is sporting a new bleeding cut that crosses over an old scar.
The scar and the cut have formed an X that will become legendary.
He unites her ebony hair and lets it cascade around him.
He runs his fingers through it and even though her hair is matted with blood, it's still silky.
The memory of his blade cutting half way through her body flashes through his head.
She had saved him and he had killed her.
The memories from the day's events begin to clog his senses.
(Flashback)
He had awoken lying on his futon, which was unusual since he usually occupied a corner of the house during the night.
Katsura had come in to report helpful news and was surprised to see his friend still sleeping.
Katsura told Kenshin of Tomoe's betrayal and until he saw what was written in her diary, he had refused to believe it.
Kenshin grabbed his swords and headed towards the mountain.
(End flashback)
Tomoe had pulled the dagger out of her husband's enemy when she fell.
Kenshin's sword had cut most of its way through her body and she could feel the life seeping out of her.
She didn't blame Kenshin though but when she tried to tell him this, she found that her lips were unable to move.
Instead, she used the very last of her energy to complete the mark that her former husband had left.
The birds twitter on making it seem as everything is right in the world.
Kenshin's famous X shaped scar drips a trail of blood down his face and the tears mix with the blood.
(A/N: Not much I could do in the way of rewrite for this chapter (I didn't leave myself enough room to do anything). I hope that I can redo the next chapters without as many problems! Well that was the first chapter to this story! Hope you liked it! PLEASE REVIEW!!!)