Author's Notes: This is my first fanfic by myself, and I'd like some CONSTRUCTIVE or completely gruesome and hurtful criticism on this cuz my friends are totally beating me on the writing thing….
Disclaimer: I don't own anything about or related to Harry Potter. Except Andromeda. My friend made her up. I think.
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"AARGH!" he whispered. In his frustration, Sirius punched Peter on the arm. He winced.
"What did I do!" Peter said in a hushed voice.
Sirius glared at him for a few seconds, assuming he'd know what happened, then started to explain.
"You sneezed! That's what! Now Andromeda could be storming down here any minute to give us a detention and spoil our plan!"
"SHUSH UP, YOU TWO!" James and Remus whispered in unison.
The four of them sat crouched behind the corridor, looking out for professors. It was another brilliant plan to get to Honey Dukes without getting caught. And it wasn't working.
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"I still don't get what's going on," said Peter's squeaky voice.
Sirius rolled his eyes.
"We're making a map of the school."
"Why? Don't you know where everything is by now?"
Sirius ran his fingers through his hair.
"Yes, but this map shows you where everyone is in the halls."
Peter nodded in understanding. He watched for a moment as Remus and James were furiously working on getting the parchment to deflate.
"Oh! So we can tell where to be and when to be there?" he said in an exited voice.
"Exactly!" Sirius said, happy he finally understood.
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Sirius looked back to the empty corridor and heard footsteps approaching. He pounded his fists on the wall.
"Sirius! Stop it!" Remus cautioned. Sirius grunted and stepped away from the wall. Remus's normally calm and quiet face was beaded with sweat as he tried to study the map for the passage way.
"Gimme that!" James had frantically snatched the parchment of moving dots out of Remus's hands. His face paled and it seemed as if he was about to speak, but his lips didn't move. The other three crowded around him to see what was so shocking. All of the boy's faces went pale. The dot marked 'Dumbledore' was standing a few feet away from their own…
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Author's Notes: Yup, that's my fanfic. PLEASE review it with constructive criticism! Thank you-pf