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Twilight of the new age
Preference
The night was dark as she ran through the forest the air wet on her lungs, her muscles
burning in agony as she ran form the darkness and ran towards the one she loves hoping
he was still alive. as she ran she began remembering what her family had told her that
evening about her new love, everything seemed so easy know here she ran for her life to
hope that maybe he was alive and all the evils she here'd weren't true.
At the end of the forest a man in total upset and anger sat not understanding what
happening he just couldn't understand why all of a sudden he felt empty. This didn't
make sense why did he have to meet her in the safety of a church, and why he must fight
for there lives.
Suddenly the doors to the church burst open and this young mans love came through the
door dripping in blood her clothes ripped and tears rolling down her face she says " there
dead, there all dead" "my sisters your brothers there gone." She takes a deep sucking
breath and says "the men said it was because.. of.." and right behind her a whistling
sounds ends in a light thud and as he reached his hands out to move her he realized a
spear had pierced her.
All of a sudden my eyes shot open and even though I wasn't sleeping it felt as thought I
had a nightmare. But it was impossible I don't sleep and haven't for years.
Chapter 1
It has been about 5 years sense renesume was born and I became a vampire to Edwards
consistent promise that I would have to wait, guess fate thought it was about time and
personally so did I but then again I was seriously debating it because of recent events
before I found out renesume was on the way. Renesume is 5 but her body and mind were
4 times her actual age. She grew to be my height but her skin remained pale with a light
warming glowing and her hair know down to her lower back with slight wavy curls now
that the weight of her hair pulled them down her hair was still very similar to Edwards
color.
We still were nervous about the voltori even though they promised that wouldn't come
back right away we still had a plan in place to get renesume out of the way with Jacob at
her side. As her friend or lover, it was getting close Edward and I noticed this intimate
love grow everyday as renesume grew know she is 17 she would soon find love in Jacob.
This always made me nervous, suddenly I realized embarrassingly I was growling ever so
slightly but not slightly enough for Edward not to hear at this point I figured it would be
easier just to show Edward what I was thinking about and I did. This was I didn't have to
explain myself and at this thought he growled to, but he decided that it wasn't worth
getting worked up over and he flipped me over on the bed we had that looked similar to
the one on isle esume.
Suddenly I was completely and utterly distracted by his hands moving from my hair to
my hips then out of the corner of my very sharp currently distracted eyes I realized it was morning and I had to figure out how to get Edward up as well. But it was like he was reading my mind because he sighed really heavy and said " we should get up and dressed, nessie would be awake soon" at that moment I glared at Edward I hated when he called her nessie always have and always will unfortunately it was Jacob is the one whom started this.
We both got up and began searching that giant maze of a closet Alice insisted we have for a pair of jeans luckily Edward taught me how to find jeans and a t-shirt, it wasn't really hard just you need to know what your looking for. Once I finally got to my familiar drawer I pulled out some blue faded jeans and blue sweater. Today was a big day and I felt bad but it was time to tell renesume we were moving and I wondered if she would be happy in our new place it was very similar to this one and again the main house was huge but Edward insisted we had our own place. We decided that Jacob was going with us and he already had a job lined up and his own apartment it was kind of a gift but I insisted that he be given as little as possible because he would feel bad having to accept it in the beginning.
I here'd renesume in the restroom and it was time to break the news.
Edward and I walked out of the bedroom dressed and ready for confrontation of course we called Jacob the night before telling him to come here this morning.
As we walked out we saw Jacob on the couch and renesume just sitting next to him seeing we were coming out of our bedroom.
Renesume pov
So recently my mommy and daddy have been acting really wired around me and I have asked several time by touching them but they never tell me. I bet today was the day they would tell me what was up. I know that if Jacob new he would have told me so that's why he didn't know. Mommy and daddy had me waiting on the couch with Jake. It was hard to tell what they were thinking but I was hoping they would finally tell me.
"Renesume, Jacob you mother and I have something to tell you. Well we decided its time to move, Carlisle is getting questions and your mother and I still look like we could be in high school. It time" Edward says
Suddenly I felt my blood rise in my throat and my ears and face flushed and I began thinking wildly, what! I like it hear what about grandpa, Jacob and Uncle Billy? We can't move!
Daddy was listening in and I could tell he was worried and then all of a suddenly I felt this odd feeling in my eyes it was kind of funny then wet rain pored from my eyes..i was crying I never cried before..
Then I saw the look on mommy's and daddy's face and the look on Jacobs as well and realized I was hurting them some how. Then I noticed mom drop down to my level and raised my chin gently and say "renesume were doing this for your safety and for ours, we love u honey and we think this is time."
Then my daddy answered one of my questions and to my relief he said "Jacob we found u a great job at a car shop we also have gotten u an apartment, it not extravagant or anything Bella decided u would like simple"
Thank god I was thinking to myself, then the thought came in my head when and wear are we moving? As if on cue my fathered answered "well were moving to Alaska and the main house is already packed we will be leaving this week." "So Jacob please go pack what u need and come here. Alice and jasper are already packing our things well get renesume's, and well be out soon. Well be staying at a hotel for a few days then well catch a flight."
This was all happening so fast I wonder if something was happening. I wish I was gifted like daddy things would be so much easier.
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