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Disclaimer: I do not own How to Train Your Dragon.
Hiccup and the Viking teenagers were just out for a dragon bonding exercise; Hiccup spotted something from above, it looked like a Night Fury but he could have been seeing things. He curiously looked again and saw the blast. Toothless managed to see the blast and took control of him and himself.
"What are you doing?" Astrid shouted.
"I have no idea what is happening!' Hiccup screamed back.
"Ha, look at that dweeb." Snotlout teased.
"Oh," Astrid said in disgust.
Toothless was driving Hiccup this way and that way. Finally, they crashed into the forest beneath them. The Viking teenagers heard a loud thud.
"That's it I'm going after them." Astrid announced. She dived down following in the direction that they crashed.
"Me too," Fishlegs said.
"We'll go to the destruction, I guess." The twins announced.
"Whatever, I'm not going." Snotlout yelled. But Hookfang had different plans Hookfang followed the others down to where Toothless and Hiccup crashed.
"Hiccup," Fishlegs and Astrid yelled.
"Whoa, check out this destruction." Tuffnut said amazed.
"I know right. It's beautiful." Ruffnut replied.
"There you are. I thought I'd never find you." Astrid said relieved. She ran towards Hiccup and Toothless. Luckily they weren't horribly injured by the fall.
They stumbled into what looked like a camp. There was a Viking made shelter thing, with a rock which looked like Toothless' bed which also had Night Fury blast marks and a dragon made fire of some sort.
"What in the world," Fishlegs mumbled.
They didn't realise that a person was watching them not so far up in the branches. They didn't realise that they were in her camp. They didn't realise that she was about to attack them.
"It looks like someone and a dragon might live here," Hiccup finally managed to say.
"You think," Snotlout answered back.
Suddenly out of nowhere the girl that was watching them quietly and as stealthy slid down from the branch and on to Tuffnut's shoulder. She started punching him in the face with his own head.
"I'm hurt, I am very much hurt," Tuffnut screamed. Tuffnut ran away repeating that over and over again.
Everyone looked at the girl that just jumped off Tuffnut's shoulder. Snotlout tried to impress Astrid by taking down the mysterious Viking but he failed like he always does. The girl put is foot on the back of his head when she took him down. Her next victim was going to be Hiccup. Toothless wasn't able to defend Hiccup because he was too tired. Hiccup was covering his face.
The mysterious Viking hesitated and just said, "Hiccup."
Just then, a Night Fury with blue eyes jumped out in a protective position that Toothless sometimes does with Hiccup.
"It is okay, Blackstorm. It's okay, they're friends and one's a family member. Wait, is that your brother over there," she said calmly and pointed to Toothless.
Blackstorm ran over to Toothless and looked at him confused or in a caring way. Everyone stared at her.
"You still don't recognize me, Hiccup," she said it like she was teaching toddlers.
"No," Hiccup answered.
"I'm your fifteen minute younger sister that got abducted by a Night Fury" she said.
"Still not following," he answered back.
"I'm Scar Haddock but people call me now The Dragon Tamer, which you may or may not know,"
"Oh, I remember you now," Hiccup said almost giving himself a face palm.
"Yeah sorry about that," Scar said.
"Scar, how about you come back to the Village with us?" Astrid said.
"Yeah, Dad will enjoy seeing you again," Hiccup said.
"Oh, okay, but only if there is a race," Scar replied.
Everyone said "Yes."
So Scar called Blackstorm, she came. Scar and Hiccup gave them ahead start. When she was ready Hiccup & Toothless took off and Scar & Dark storm followed.
How will Stoick react to seeing Scar again? You'll find out.
