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Author's Notes:
Alright, this is my first story that I actually have a plot and a desire to finish. This will eventually be a yaoi fic, but that's not until after a few chapters. I'm looking for a beta reader because I absolutely hate reviewing my own work because I often put too much trust in my own abilities. The pairings will become obvious later, but this is a KyuubixOC. That's about it. Enjoy!
Twenty Tails
The story begins long ago, but only truly starts a few months ago. So, we shall begin there, but first, a little background is necessary.
One the human race started finding the hidden potential of chakra manipulation and jutsu, it became necessary that a failsafe be implemented by the gods to keep the humans from ever disturbing the balance of nature. The gods created demons, but at first, there was only one demon. The Ten-Tailed Wolf, said to be more powerful than any human on earth. The purpose of the Ten-Tailed wolf was to eliminate all threats to the balance of nature before any damage was done. However, corrupted by the power of ten tails, the beast was driven into insanity and unleashed it's fury onto the world.
Once again, the gods intervened. They selected a human to stop the wolf from wreaking havoc on the order it sought to maintain. Thus, the rinnegan were created. Its possessor used the power of the ocular jutsu to subdue and seal the wolf inside of himself and took the name of the Sage of Six Paths. During his life, he preached about peace and jutsu. But he realized that none where capable of handling the wolf's power. He separated the wolf's chakra into nine different demons, thus the Bijuu were born.
The Bijuu mated and continued to have children, all of whom they sent to another dimension to be safe, because the Bijuu, even with their immense power, were at constant threat of human subjugation. Only the wolf was able to maintain dominance over most humans. The separated powers of it had a harder time.
During the peak of the Roman Empire, there came a time where all of the Bijuu were sealed inside humans of the same nation. The gods once more sought intervention. Their response was to create a being so mentally and physically stable, that it would dominate for eternity. And that's just what they did. The gods created another demon, the world's first, last, and only twenty tailed demon.
They named him Amida, the twenty-tailed griffin. He was given everything that the gods have to offer. He was able to use all basic and complex chakra types, he had more chakra than all of the Bijuu combined and then some, he knew all jutsu and was able to master them to their fullest extent whenever a new jutsu was created, he had blood contracts with all animal spirits, and he possessed the greatest ocular jutsu ever created: The Kamigan or God's Eye. The Kamigan gave Amida complete 360 degree vision with no blind spots up to 1000 km away. It gave him the ability to copy jutsu (not that he needed to). He was able to see chakra and distinguish between all chakra signatures. But the greatest ability the eyes gave him was planar manipulation. This allowed him to control time and control the planes of life in all dimensions.
This ability gave birth to two infallible jutsu. One: Dimensional Disintegration, which allowed Amida to lock every atom in a person's being and in all of their chakra signatures in the world, and seal each atom separately into multiple dimensions. However, this technique required a tremendous about of chakra output and a large blood sacrifice, but it was the only way to truly destroy an enemy's existence. The second has never been seen before, and for good reason. The second ability allowed Amida to open an inter-dimensional portal to the gods themselves. Any of the gods, ranging from 50 to 100 tails could then move into the human world and reestablish humanity. Kami himself could also move within the portal, or so it has been rumored. The portal is very dangerous, because in exchange for reestablishing humanity, Amida must give his life.
Amida's sole purpose in life was to maintain the order by eliminating all threats to the delicate balance of nature. These people included those who had no definite end in sight. These people become known to Amida by direct mental connection with the Fates.
So, Amida was born as the peak of the Roman Empire struck, and so did Amida. Rome burned for a reason, Caesars were assassinated for a reason, Rome fell for a reason, and that reason was Amida. In summary, the Bijuu were released and Amida retreated into a quiet lifestyle occasionally making people disappear into nothing, and that's where we find him now.
Amida stood, in human form, breathing heavily in the shadow of a tree. He was having more trouble with this victim than usual. He eyed the tall, brown haired shinobi panting in the center of the clearing. His armor was ripped, and his body was bruised. Mud and blood were splattered across his black armor, and a long, bleeding cut ran from his forehead to his chin.
Amida stepped out of the shadow and stood at his full height. He spoke in a low, threatening voice, "I enjoyed this little fight of ours, but I'm afraid I have someone to meet with soon. Sooo, this might hurt a little. I don't know personally, and no one is around anymore who has experienced it."
The brown haired man's eye widened in shock. The man had used his full power on this guy and was not able to put a scratch on him, and cthere was more?!
Amida crossed his arms so that his index, middle, and ring fingers were at the base of the opposing elbow. He said quietly, "planar style: Planar Prison." He dug his nails into his own flesh as an infinite number of chakra planes erupted around the brown-haired target. At least three planes intersected on each and every single atom of the man's being.
The man's eyes widened more as purple chakra froze him in place. The last thing he heard was, "Planar Style: Dimensional Disintegration!" Then he felt every morsel of his being ripped apart until he was no more.
Amida drug his nails down his forearms toward each other. His now flowing blood defied gravity and instead pooled into the space between his parallel palms. The blood swirled into a center point until it disappeared into the point. His blood sealed the pieces of existence into the other realms. As the last of the blood swirled into the void, Amida fell over into the trunk of a tree.
Now he was panting heavily, he never realizes how draining that jutsu really is. His vision starts hazing. 'Crap. Not good, I cannot black out here,' he thought desperately. He quickly ran through a few hand signs and bites his thumb. There was a puff of smoke that a large hawk emerged from. The hawk eyed Amida with worry.
Amida mumbled, "Nadra, take me to the village hidden in the leaves, the hokage building." The massive hawk nodded and allowed the griffin to climb upon its back. They took off quickly and flew at incredible speeds to the destination. The fast winds felt good on Amida's skin as his dark red hair was tossed with the winds. He knew there would be a risk in heading to one of the hidden villages, but his next target was there, and he knew that the hokage would not turn him away. Amida managed to stay conscious the entire time, else the hawk's anchor would disappear and he would plummet to the earth.
Before the pair knew it a large sprawling city unfurled before their eyes. He was almost there. But, as anticipated a lone kunai flew through the air and whizzed past the flying duo. A warning. Nadra flew higher and faster to avoid the cloud of kunai and shuriken now streaking towards them, but Nadra would not vary from getting his payload to the destination. So after a swift descent, the hawk landed on top of the hokage tower and let the man on his back get off.
Amida stumbled on his feet before collapsing to the ground. At that moment sixteen ANBU surround the pair. Nadra squawked indigently and covered Amida's body with his wings, effectively protecting him from harm. "Nadra," Amida started, "please go home." Amida made a hand sign and the hawk disappeared into smoke with another protective squawk. Now, eight of the ANBU charged at the prone figure on their leader's building.
"Stop!" a voice commanded as the hokage herself emerged from the roof. The ANBU stopped immediately. "This person has done nothing but collapse in our village. Bring him to the hospital." And that's all he heard before Amida was consumed by darkness.
So what do you people think? I love people who comment. I do have the next couple chapters written, but I need to format them. Please review.
