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Yugioh Power of the Greek Gods
Chapter One-The New Kid
Teacher: We have a new student, Li Chaos.
Li: Hello.
Teacher: Mr. Chaos why don't you sit next to Yugi Mouto.
Later at lunch.
Yugi: Hi Li do you duel?
Li: Yeah lets duel now.
Yugi: Sure.
LP
Li: 8000
Yugi: 8000
Li: I'll go first, I play this in defense mode and play this card face down.
Yugi: I play Neo the Magic Swordsman (1700/1000) and attack your face down card.
Li: Wall of Illusion (1000/1850) not only do you lose 150 LP Neo goes back into your hand.
Yugi: 7850
Yugi: I play one card face down and end my turn.
Li: I play La Jinn (1800/1000) and attack you directly with La Jinn and then I play Ookazi taking 800 LP and end my turn.
Yugi: 6250
Yugi: I play Skilled Dark Magician and play three Book of Secret Arts to summon Dark Magician (With Book of SA 3400/3000).
Li: Reverse Trap.
Dark Magician (1600/1200)
Yugi: I end my turn.
I tribute both of my monsters for the Blue Eyes White Dragon and attack Dark Magician and end my turn.
Yugi: 4850
Yugi: I play three Tribute Dolls to summon Slifer (3000/3000), and then I flip over Sword and Shield and attack your Blue Eyes.
Li: 7500
Li: I play Ultimate Offering to summon three monsters and tribute them to summon a Greek God card, Ares God of War (6000/6000 Effect: Can attack 3 times at the cost of 500 LP each) and attach three Axe of Despair.
Li: 5500
Li: Then I attack Slifer and then you directly.
Li: 4500
Yugi: 0000
Yugi: That was a good duel, where'd you get that Greek God card.
Li: I got it while I was visiting Greece, Yugi is that a Millennium Item.
Yugi: Yeah
Li: I have one too
Li pulled out of his pocket a golden pencil.
Li It's the Millennium Pencil, what ever I write comes true and what ever I draw comes to life it has a Yami sprit he was an ancient Egyptian artist and scribe his name is Kao.
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Yugioh Power of the Greek Gods
Chapter One-The New Kid
Teacher: We have a new student, Li Chaos.
Li: Hello.
Teacher: Mr. Chaos why don't you sit next to Yugi Mouto.
Later at lunch.
Yugi: Hi Li do you duel?
Li: Yeah lets duel now.
Yugi: Sure.
LP
Li: 8000
Yugi: 8000
Li: I'll go first, I play this in defense mode and play this card face down.
Yugi: I play Neo the Magic Swordsman (1700/1000) and attack your face down card.
Li: Wall of Illusion (1000/1850) not only do you lose 150 LP Neo goes back into your hand.
Yugi: 7850
Yugi: I play one card face down and end my turn.
Li: I play La Jinn (1800/1000) and attack you directly with La Jinn and then I play Ookazi taking 800 LP and end my turn.
Yugi: 6250
Yugi: I play Skilled Dark Magician and play three Book of Secret Arts to summon Dark Magician (With Book of SA 3400/3000).
Li: Reverse Trap.
Dark Magician (1600/1200)
Yugi: I end my turn.
I tribute both of my monsters for the Blue Eyes White Dragon and attack Dark Magician and end my turn.
Yugi: 4850
Yugi: I play three Tribute Dolls to summon Slifer (3000/3000), and then I flip over Sword and Shield and attack your Blue Eyes.
Li: 7500
Li: I play Ultimate Offering to summon three monsters and tribute them to summon a Greek God card, Ares God of War (6000/6000 Effect: Can attack 3 times at the cost of 500 LP each) and attach three Axe of Despair.
Li: 5500
Li: Then I attack Slifer and then you directly.
Li: 4500
Yugi: 0000
Yugi: That was a good duel, where'd you get that Greek God card.
Li: I got it while I was visiting Greece, Yugi is that a Millennium Item.
Yugi: Yeah
Li: I have one too
Li pulled out of his pocket a golden pencil.
Li It's the Millennium Pencil, what ever I write comes true and what ever I draw comes to life it has a Yami sprit he was an ancient Egyptian artist and scribe his name is Kao.
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