Hi everyone who takes their time to read this! just an idea that's been in my mind way to long! (I have decided to do this in 3ed person POV's (point of views))
Chapter 1 - Hidden
(Duncan's POV)
The castle was never quiet, but the noises never changed, it was just the constant sound of machines working away. That was why, when the sound of knocking came, Duncan jumped. When you are in the middle of doing extremely delicate work on a important piece of machinery, jumping is not the best thing to do. Jumping caused him to stab the machinery, stabbing the machinery caused a small explosion, the small explosion caused…well, you get the picture. He stood up and expected the damage; he was led to the conclusion that it was well and truly stuffed. Another round of knocking spread though the castle, Duncan headed to the nearest window and flew out to the main gates.
He opened the gates to find a figure he did not recognise, but even if it was someone he already knew he would not have recognised them. They wore all black; long black boots, black trousers, black top, black belt, black strap around their shoulder with a bag of arrows attached to it, a long black cape with a hood which was up, black face mask and black goggles. Their clothes completely hid them. What were they hiding?
"Hi…what happened to you?" They asked. The'small' explosion had left his bright white lab coat covered in black soot.
"Nothing, it's fine now…who are you?"
"I am…" she stared into the distance as if she was thinking up a name. "Kimi… or just Kim… yep that's my name!" (now I know what people are going to think; she got that name off that new Yogscast member Kim - maybe that's who this person is! Well sorry - it's not her and I didn't get the name off her. I chose it because it was the only good girls name that means hidden!) She nodded to herself, as if she was trying to reassure herself that that was her name.
"Ok well, why are you here?" she opened her mouth but quickly shut it again as both of them started to feel tired. Then a needle of pain hit them and they began to feel light, like they were flying. Then the world in front of them was engulfed in darkness.
Thank's for reading; hopefully this will become something good!
*Throws smoke bomb thing on floor, smoke clears and I'm lying on the floor knocked out with a particular someone standing besideme with a frying pan*
Kim- and that's for missing out half of are conversation on your profile! you told me you'll put it all in, not edit bits out and change bits!
P.S going to post another chapter for before the boom hopefully in the next week or two maybe even another chapter for this.