Disclaimer: I don't own Gundam Wing, Wrong Turn, or any company
products I may mention. (I really don't know if I have to disclaim that,
but I'd rather be safe than sorry.)
Warnings: No yaoi, and the story I'm writing is just based off of the movie, it wont be exactly the same because I just saw it last night and cant really remember it all anyways. Plus I thought I'd give it my own kind of twist. Haha.
********************************************************** Wrong Turn
Chapter 1
It was a bright autumn day when the sun was shining and a light breeze shifted through the tall oak trees of the isolated forest in West Virginia. The aroma of fresh clear air and smoke from a campfire could be smelled over the treetops. The forest was alive with life from the animals and birds that lived there and the sky was clear with fluffy white clouds dotted here and there.
A rumpling of rocks and the laughter of a female could be heard around in the forest. On a cliff in the near center of the forest were a woman and her boyfriend, rock climbing. Her black hair was plastered to her tanned face from sweat and she wiped it off onto her arm. She clung to her rope and looked up to her boyfriend.
"Zechs, wait up" she whined. She placed her Reebok tennis shoe on another rock.
"C'mon Noin" he answered. As he reached the top he took off his harness and rope. He looked around. Nothing but the tall green trees and luscious shaded grasses below them. Suddenly he heard his girlfriend scream and her rope slide quickly through the pulley-system attaching it to the top of the cliff. He looked over the edge and saw her dangling there, still alive and conscience.
"Hey are you alright?" he called down to her.
"Yea... yea I'm fine." She answered grabbing the cliff again. She started climbing again, this time following in the same path that her boyfriend had taken, to avoid any more loose rocks.
"Well hurry up." Zechs said, disappearing from his girlfriend's sight again.
"Pull me up?" She told him. It was stated as a question, but meant as an order. He didn't respond. She sat there and listened for a minute, hearing only muffled noises.
"Zechs."
Still no answer. She started climbing again, thinking that maybe he just went walking and didn't here her calling for him. She reached a few feet more when she heard a sudden thud from above her. She looked up and saw her boyfriend peeking over the top of the cliff, lying on his stomach.
"Zechs?" she asked. Her pulse quickened and her breath shallowed.
Suddenly she felt a warm wet liquid on her upper cheek. She placed her fingers on it and wiped it away. Gazing at the sticky substance on her fingers she saw it was a dark red color.
Blood.
Studying her boyfriend she say a trail of a liquid from his pale blond
hair. It trickled over the rocks and down to her face. Her breath
caught in her throat as the strong reality of her boyfriend's dead
corpse lying only feet above her hit her hard. She felt the blood on
her face mix with another liquid as a tear slid down her cheek.
Suddenly her rope thrust her upwards and into the side of the cliff.
She screamed and frantically tried to unhook her harness. She was
jerked up again and she clung to the rock to keep from going wherever
she was wanted to go. She looked up and called out her boyfriend's
name irrationally. Suddenly she saw her boyfriend's bloody, mangled
body thrown over the side of the cliff and fall to the ground below.
She watched in horror until her rope was yanked again, harder and more
violently. She quickly pulled out her switchblade and sawed at the
rope. Cutting it in a brief moment, she fell to the ground screaming.
She landed with a thud on the sharp, hard rocks.
Slowly lifting herself she saw a bloody figure next to her. She
started wailing loudly as she stared at her boyfriends glazed blue
eyes and bloody face. Looking at the jagged cut in his throat and
ripped edges of the flesh around it, she saw that it wasn't a knife
that had cut him. Rather something uneven, maybe rusted or worn down.
Noin gasped in sudden realization of the still present danger
she was in. And with a rush of adrenaline she pushed her aching body
to its feet and started running through the trees.
She ran through the forest at speeds that she didn't realize she
had until now, until she came to a road. She could hear hideous laughs
coming from behind her and she watched as shadows darted through the
tree trunks. Her heart raced, pumping her blood through her body in
segments of heat and chills. Sweat beads laced her forehead and cheeks
and tears streaked her eyes red. She frantically searched for a way of
survival, feeling futile and panicking.
She felt a hot breath on her neck and turned around to see a
gruesome site. One of the ugliest and sickest forms of life stood just
inches away from her with a wicked smile deposited on his tabooed
face. His rotting teeth stuck out as he laughed the haunting laugh
that she had heard in the forest, just moments before.
And she screamed as her blood was splattered across the paved
ground.
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Well there's the first chapter. Let me know if you think it's
scary and if you don't tell me how I can make it scary. Me
personally, don't think it is and I think I suck at writing but
that's not what people tell me so yea. But I really want it to
be scary so let me know how I can make it scary. Thanx
Miki
Warnings: No yaoi, and the story I'm writing is just based off of the movie, it wont be exactly the same because I just saw it last night and cant really remember it all anyways. Plus I thought I'd give it my own kind of twist. Haha.
********************************************************** Wrong Turn
Chapter 1
It was a bright autumn day when the sun was shining and a light breeze shifted through the tall oak trees of the isolated forest in West Virginia. The aroma of fresh clear air and smoke from a campfire could be smelled over the treetops. The forest was alive with life from the animals and birds that lived there and the sky was clear with fluffy white clouds dotted here and there.
A rumpling of rocks and the laughter of a female could be heard around in the forest. On a cliff in the near center of the forest were a woman and her boyfriend, rock climbing. Her black hair was plastered to her tanned face from sweat and she wiped it off onto her arm. She clung to her rope and looked up to her boyfriend.
"Zechs, wait up" she whined. She placed her Reebok tennis shoe on another rock.
"C'mon Noin" he answered. As he reached the top he took off his harness and rope. He looked around. Nothing but the tall green trees and luscious shaded grasses below them. Suddenly he heard his girlfriend scream and her rope slide quickly through the pulley-system attaching it to the top of the cliff. He looked over the edge and saw her dangling there, still alive and conscience.
"Hey are you alright?" he called down to her.
"Yea... yea I'm fine." She answered grabbing the cliff again. She started climbing again, this time following in the same path that her boyfriend had taken, to avoid any more loose rocks.
"Well hurry up." Zechs said, disappearing from his girlfriend's sight again.
"Pull me up?" She told him. It was stated as a question, but meant as an order. He didn't respond. She sat there and listened for a minute, hearing only muffled noises.
"Zechs."
Still no answer. She started climbing again, thinking that maybe he just went walking and didn't here her calling for him. She reached a few feet more when she heard a sudden thud from above her. She looked up and saw her boyfriend peeking over the top of the cliff, lying on his stomach.
"Zechs?" she asked. Her pulse quickened and her breath shallowed.
Suddenly she felt a warm wet liquid on her upper cheek. She placed her fingers on it and wiped it away. Gazing at the sticky substance on her fingers she saw it was a dark red color.
Blood.
Studying her boyfriend she say a trail of a liquid from his pale blond
hair. It trickled over the rocks and down to her face. Her breath
caught in her throat as the strong reality of her boyfriend's dead
corpse lying only feet above her hit her hard. She felt the blood on
her face mix with another liquid as a tear slid down her cheek.
Suddenly her rope thrust her upwards and into the side of the cliff.
She screamed and frantically tried to unhook her harness. She was
jerked up again and she clung to the rock to keep from going wherever
she was wanted to go. She looked up and called out her boyfriend's
name irrationally. Suddenly she saw her boyfriend's bloody, mangled
body thrown over the side of the cliff and fall to the ground below.
She watched in horror until her rope was yanked again, harder and more
violently. She quickly pulled out her switchblade and sawed at the
rope. Cutting it in a brief moment, she fell to the ground screaming.
She landed with a thud on the sharp, hard rocks.
Slowly lifting herself she saw a bloody figure next to her. She
started wailing loudly as she stared at her boyfriends glazed blue
eyes and bloody face. Looking at the jagged cut in his throat and
ripped edges of the flesh around it, she saw that it wasn't a knife
that had cut him. Rather something uneven, maybe rusted or worn down.
Noin gasped in sudden realization of the still present danger
she was in. And with a rush of adrenaline she pushed her aching body
to its feet and started running through the trees.
She ran through the forest at speeds that she didn't realize she
had until now, until she came to a road. She could hear hideous laughs
coming from behind her and she watched as shadows darted through the
tree trunks. Her heart raced, pumping her blood through her body in
segments of heat and chills. Sweat beads laced her forehead and cheeks
and tears streaked her eyes red. She frantically searched for a way of
survival, feeling futile and panicking.
She felt a hot breath on her neck and turned around to see a
gruesome site. One of the ugliest and sickest forms of life stood just
inches away from her with a wicked smile deposited on his tabooed
face. His rotting teeth stuck out as he laughed the haunting laugh
that she had heard in the forest, just moments before.
And she screamed as her blood was splattered across the paved
ground.
**********************************************************
Well there's the first chapter. Let me know if you think it's
scary and if you don't tell me how I can make it scary. Me
personally, don't think it is and I think I suck at writing but
that's not what people tell me so yea. But I really want it to
be scary so let me know how I can make it scary. Thanx
Miki