I'm not a Raven and Robin fan but this poem seemed perfect for the situation I created. Robin was dating Starfire and he cheated on her for Raven. Starfire leaves and is always angry with everyone because they took sides with Robin. It is in Starfire pov.
The rain covered up all my tears,
My anger covered up my loneliness,
I let you in,
And you broke my heart,
I still let my anger hide my loneliness,
I didn't want to cry but I did,
I felt my knees buckle,
My heart aches,
The hole is burning and throbbing,
My vision blurring,
My head was pounding,
I was tired, lonely, broken,
I left everything I loved for you,
Even my friends,
Just for you,
I remember the day you told me you loved me,
That you would stay with me for forever,
So much for forever.
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