Precious Memories was my very first FanFic, and last time I checked I have 22 reviews, 13 favs, and 30 followers! That may not be a big deal, but as my very first I think I did pretty well! I decided to update/rewrite this entire story in honor of my little victory! :) I stuck to the original story line, but I did add a little more! Remember to review!
Take a moment to silently thank Ally Carter for being the most amazing author ever!
Cammie's POV:
"Is she okay?" I heard a distant voice as I slowly resurfaced to reality. I tried to open my eyes, but everything was a confusing blur of colors. Next thing I knew, my eyes were fluttering shut, and I was back into the darkness.
I woke up later on in the day; according to my internal clock it's 3:24 and 16 seconds. 17, 18... I slowly opened my eyes and scanned my surroundings. I sighed in relief once I realized I was still in the Gallagher Academy. Safe, away from harm's way. But why am I in Dr. Fibs lab? I closed my eyes tightly, trying to remember. I sat up, but when I did, I saw multiple wires hooked up a menacing looking computer and small tubes wrapped around my head. Nearby is a small class container with an unfamilar liquid labeled 10-1304. What happened? I struggle to search my memories but nothing.
Sleep came again to take over.
Rachel's POV:
"Is she okay?" I asked Dr. Fibs. He was rapidly tapping buttons on his computer. Cammie stirred in her sleep, finally awakening, but she quickly fell asleep again. Dr. Fibs created a fluid and a program that can erase certain memories, so I've decided to use it on Cammie to try to keep her safe from things she never should have known. It's a chance she can be safer from the Circle. But Dr. Fibs is highly accident prone, and now I'm doubting my decision. She hasn't waken for hours.
"Is she okay?" I repeated louder, my patience waning.
Dr Fibs glanced up, and paused for a while, thinking up a response. Then he said, "She's probably just very tired. Is it okay if I leave for dinner?"
I nodded, and he left me alone with Cammie. Taking her hand in mine, I spoke softly. "Hey kiddo, wake up soon, okay?" I kissed her lightly on her forehead and gave her hand one last squeeze before leaving the room.
Zach's POV:
I finally found the Grand Hall; Gallagher is a big school and even for a spy, it's easy to get lost in. No one noticed me as I walked in, which I found strange since it was a room full of spies. My eyes glanced over the room until I found the table I needed. Sitting at a table near the entrance was Bex, Macey, and Liz, but no Cammie. Why isn't she here? I would feel really stupid if I came all the way here just to find out that Cammie isn't even at Gallagher Academy. I walked swiftly over to their table and sat down. "Has anyone seen Cammie?" The table was silent compared to the bustling noise around them and I felt everyone's eyes on me. Bex eyed me suspiciously. "What are you doing here? Did you sneak in?"
"No, Rebecca, I got permission from the headmistress. " I remarked sarcastically. She shot me a look that could, and if I wasn't highly trained, probably can kill. Her hands clenched into fists for the use of her full name and I moved over to distance myself from her before she could do any damage. Much to my relief, she took a deep breath and unclenched her fists.
"Okay, then why did you sneak in?" Liz asked. For one of the smartest people I know, she can be completely clueless at times.
I shrugged in response when Macey replied for me. "To see Cammie obviously. Where is she anyway? She promised to help me study earlier." Macey gave me the same suspicious look I got from Bex. "I don't suppose you're responsible for this?"
"No!" I exclaimed. "I don't know where she is! I just got here a while ago." Geez, why am I getting blamed for everything? We're all silent again. Bex stood up all of a sudden. "Well come on don't just sit there let's look for her!" We all decide to split up, so I start walking.
Even though I would never admit it out loud, I was excited to see Cammie again. I haven't seen her for almost a year now, and I've been worried and yeah, I missed her. I tried to think of what to say when I find her. Maybe I'll have the guts to tel her how I feel. The thought of seeing her and hearing her voice again brought a smile to my face so I kept eagerly searching.
So, what'd you think? I didn't change much with this chapter. If you can, in your review answer these three questions:
What do you like most about this chapter and why?
What should I change/what should I try to improve on?
Coke or Pepsi? Do you think there's a difference?
The first two are to help me improve at writing, the last one is completely random. In my opinion Coke is better and yes, there is a difference. Just saying.
Thanks for reading!
~crazyshay77~