Hello, this is my first REAL fanfic, the other attempt doesn't count because it sucked. :( well anyway please read and tell me what you think about it, even if you absolutely hate it. I just wanna know what I'm doing right and wrong. Pleeeeaaaassse review!
Disclaimer: I do not own FMA or any of the characters, I just like to play with them:P
"So, are you coming?" Said my friend Claire. She wanted me to come over since My'kaela and Katlyn were coming. We were going to make a cosplay video. I was going to be Haruhi, since I'm the flattest, if ya catch my drift.
"Ofcorse, I'll be there at 4:00."
"Hay, before you go, how's the 'project' going?"
"I think I've finally done it! Don't tell everyone else though, I probably won't succeed."
"Yes sir!" she said in a mock military way.
After that I started packing, I put my costume and a weeks worth of clothes in my black duffle bag. Then I gathered my materials in my room, and drew a transmutation circle on the floor. After I put the material in the center, I put my hands on the edge of the circle, praying it would work. *Here goes nothing,* I thought to myself. In my head, I started going through the chemical reaction that needed to happen to change this into the right material and focusing on how I wanted to reconstruct it.
And to my surprise and delight, I felt energy flow in and out of me. And I literally squealed when I saw the soft golden light coming from the circle. When it was over, I walked to the center and picked up the little doll I was going to give my four year old sister, it was pretty good. I was so happy that the research payed off, and that after failing time and time again for a year and nine months, I was going to celebrate with my friends by pigging out on junk food till I passed out! I threw my duffle bag over my shoulder, starting to walk out of my room with a grin on my face so big, it would put the Cheshire Cat himself to shame, when out of nowhere a giant gate appears. A. Giant. Ass. Gate. In front of the gate was a... an it, smiling at me.
"Do you know why I'm here?" It asked, it's voice not a particular way, scarring the crap out me.
I snapped out of my state enough to answer in a small, scarred, voice "No." I couldn't believe my eyes, the gate looked just like the one from FMA except real! And so that must be Truth, but why would Truth come here and talk to me?!
And as if on cue, he asked "Would you like to know?"
And because I'm a fucking idiot, I didn't run away screaming like I wanted to, not that it probably would've worked, and nodded, still amazed.
"I'm here because of you." He stated.
"Why?" I just had to fucking ask, like an idiot.
"Because, you did alchemy." He said, as if it would suddenly make everything clear.
"What's wrong with that?" I asked, completely clueless at this point.
"Alchemy is impossible in this world, yet you did it. And now you must pay the price."
"Wait, pay the price?! You can't do that! If alchemy is impossible then how the fuck did I do it, huh! Because if I did it then it clearly isn't fucking impossible!" I said, worried what paying the price would be, trying to prove him wrong.
"While you may not understand, it is 'supposed' to be impossible, but you did it. There for you must pay the price, for doing the impossible." He said plainly, as if he wasn't clearly scarring the crap out of me. "But since you didn't know the consequences, or that it was supposed to be impossible, I'll make you a deal. If you can get back, I'll allow you to use your alchemy here, but, you should know you must still pay the price. And I will leave a few reminders so you don't forget."
Just then, the gate started opening, and little black hands started grabbing me. Suddenly, all this information on alchemy entered my brain. I tried to run when I noticed my right arm was disappearing. I creamed, it didn't hurt but it was freaking scary! Then I started struggling as best as I could, and to my surprise, it started to work. But then their grip became stronger, and they started to give me a giant claw marks when I kept struggling, and after 7 of them, everything went black.
Ed was walking back to Winry's house with Al after taking a walk, catching up with his little brother. He was sixteen now, and had just gotten back from the other side of the gate 11 days ago. Ed still had an automail arm and leg but was 5'6" now, but Al was catching up, and he remembered most of the time he spent stuck in that suit of armor now. Him and Ed were laughing at a joke he told when suddenly the gate appeared. And guess who was sitting in front of it, the one and only Truth. But he was holding someone. A girl. Her right arm was missing, and she was covered in what appeared to be scratches from a creature with massive claws. Her short, dirty blond hair was growing very fast and white streaks started to appear.
After a minute of stunned silence from the two brothers Truth decided to speak, "Edward Elric, I see you're catching up with your brother."
"What do you want Truth, you let me come back home, and I don't plan on leaving any time soon."
"Calm down, I am simply here to bring someone to this world, it is her price to pay." And with that he vanished, leaving the girl to bleed.
"Brother, what do you think Truth means?" Al asked.
"I'm not sure but we need to get her to Winry's before she bleeds to death." So Ed clapped his hands and put them on the ground making some cloth to use as temporary bandages.
After ten minutes they finally arrived at Winry and Granny Pinako's house. Winry and Pinako took the girl to the other guest room they had and put her on the bed, they then removed her clothes to clean and bandage her wounds, most of which looked like they were made from a giant beast with huge claws. When they asked what happened to her, the answer shocked them into silence. What could she have done that would make Truth take her arm.
"What did he mean by 'bring someone to this world'?" Asked a confused Winry.
Ed answered her, "Maybe she's from the other side of the gate, but that still doesn't explain why Truth brought her here."
"We'll just have to ask her when she wakes up, brother." Said a worried Al.
"Ok, let's get some sleep then."
{the next day, noon}
Ed, Al, and Winry were all sitting in chairs next to the bed where the girl laid sleeping. They were all wondering what happened and decided to watch her for a while. They'd been there for two and a half hours and finally gave up. They then went to the living room and started talking. And three minutes later, she started moving.
"Mmmhmmhm... yaaaaaaaaahhwww," I yawned. I started opening my eyes and rubbing them with my left hand, since I couldn't feel my right arm I figured it was just num. I felt like crap, big time. Then I looked down and yelled in surprise, "WHAT THE FUCK, MY BOOBS ARE FREAKING HUGE!" Like the total freaking weird dumb ass I am, and started to grab them with my left hand and squeezing them to only figure out they were real. Then I noticed my arm was gone and flipped out even more. "MY FREAKING ARM IS GONE! What the hell freaking happened!" I started panicking when three familiar looking face barged into the room. They were the faces of who I realized were the real Winry Rockbell, Alphonse Elric, and Edward freaking Elric. Then I remembered what happened, it all rushed back to me in mere seconds. And I did the only thing I knew how to do at that moment, I said "Oh my freaking god, this isn't fucking possible." And put my hand in my now Repunzle length hair. Now I was really panicking, I was in another dimension that's supposed to only exist as freaking anime and manga, and my boobs were suddenly huge, and my hair was freaking loooooong, and to top it all off I was missing an arm. I was starting to hyperventilate saying, "This isn't real, it's just some weird dream and none of that happened. I'm really sleeping in my bed at home and probably snoring and drooling with short hair and both my arms." I wasn't convincing myself at all and hugged my legs to my enlarged chest. Trying to think how the hell this was possible.
Suddenly, Edward was next to me petting my hair while Al and Winry told me "It's ok, it's all ok," and "Everthings going to be fine, you don't need to worry," and I started to calm down, a few tears staining my pale cheeks, which were even paler than they usually are if that's possible, and I took a few deep breathes before asking the question I dreaded the most but needed to ask, "Where am I?"
Then Ed answered "Resembull." And I actually paled even more. And to tell you the truth I probably looked like a ghost.
"Where is that?" I asked, just for good measure, even though I already knew.
"Ameastris." He said. And I started to cry, I didn't know why, not exactly, I just couldn't stop them. I didn't want to cry in front of them, but I couldn't hold back the tears. I hated to admit it but I was scarred. And they all just rubbed my back gently, watching out for the huge slashes on my back, and gave me soft hugs. After I had finally calmed down and stopped crying, Ed asked me, "Why did Truth bring you here?"
I sniffled a little and looked up into his eyes, they were much more beautiful in real life, like two small suns. Then I said, "It's because I did alchemy."
Everyone was quiet, then Ed and Al simultaneously busted out, "But that doesn't make any sense!"
"But it's supposed to be impossible in my world." I replied, unable to believe that I was actually saying those words.
"So your from the other side of the gate?" Ed asked, and I nodded. "Do you mind telling us what happened?"
"Sure," I said, not sure where to start, "Well... I-I... um... in my world it's 2015, and well, there's this show called 'FullMetal Alchemist'," their eyes widened at that. "And it's about Edward and Alphonse Elric, and their search for the philosophers stone. It went on until Ed got Al's body back and ended up in our world during the 1900s. I liked the show a lot and even though I didn't think it was real, I thought that alchemy might really be possible. So I started to look up all I could on it. Most of it was crap, but every now and then I would find some real information. I tried and failed probably a million freaking times, but I'm stubborn and kept trying anyways. Then, the other day, my friend Claire asked me to come over since she was having My'kaela and Katlyn over too. So I packed my bag, then I noticed I had a couple hours left till I went to her house and decided to try to make a doll with alchemy. I had found the last information I needed to know to do it, and I felt like I really was gonna do it. I set up everything and and actually made a doll. I was getting my bag to leave my room and give the doll to Sophia, my little sister, when a giant gate appeared in front of me. Truth was sitting in front of it smiling and scarring the crap out of me. It asked me if I knew why he- I mean it, was there, I told him no and he asked if I wanted to know. I was a fucking idiot and didn't runaway like my gut said, and said yes. He said that alchemy is impossible in my world so I had to pay the price for doing it. I told him that if it's impossible then how freak did I do it. He told me it's 'supposed' to be impossible and that he'd make a deal with me since I didn't know what I was getting into. He told me if I get back to my world he'll let me use my alchemy there but said I still had to pay the price. I was scarred, and the gate opened and all these hands started to grab me. Then my arm started disappearing and I kept trying to get away, but there grip just got stronger, and they started making giant rips in my skin until I blacked out. Then I woke up here, wondering what the fuck is going on, and you guys know the rest."
So did you like it? I hope so, I'm going to see this story through no matter what. After all, I can't just give up every time I don't think it's good enough. Well, if you review I will give you an imagination cookie, even if it says how much you hate it. :)