Hey guys! This is my second Escaflowne fic, and I hope you enjoy it. After getting so many good reviews for my first Esca fic 'The Other Cinderella' I decided to write this story! I actually got the idea for it after watching The Mask of Zorro (the movie) and that little scene where Elaina talks to the dude who she thinks is a priest. Ok, I'll shut up now.
Forgive Me Father, For I have Sinned
One sunny afternoon, a young man slowly walked towards a church. After assuring himself that no one was watching, he pushed open the big wooden door and walked inside. The church gave the man the creeps. The smell, the religious statues, but he continued anyway.
The man walked along until he spotted something that he had been looking for. The booth thingy where he would be free to confess his problem. Quietly he opened one of the doors and stepped inside, hoping that a priest was there.
"Is there a priest in here?" the man asked.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
On the otherside, a young woman, who was also waiting for a priest. Just when she was about to tell the man on the otherside that she was not the priest, she saw a pair of blue eyes through the screen that seemed very familiar.
"What brings you here, my child?" the woman asked, making her voice sound as male as possible.
"Forgive me Father, for I have sinned. My last confession was....well....never."
"Go on my child," the woman urged. "Tell me your problem."
"I have a girlfriend," the man began. "and I do love her, it's just that I have a feeling that she is cheating on me with a friend....er....rival of mine."
"It's natural to feel that way sometimes."
"But that's not my biggest problem!" the man insisted. "Although she may not be cheating on me, I am cheating on her."
The woman gasped. "With who?"
"A Princess."
The woman was even more shocked. This was beginning to sound like she may be more involved with this man than she thought.
"A Princess of what country?"
The man swallowed hard. "Asturia," he replied.
The woman stood up, got out of her side of the booth, and threw open the door on the otherside. "Allen!" she gasped.
"Oh my god! Hitomi!"
Hitomi, who knew exactly who Allen was cheating on her with, grabbed the collar of his shirt and threw him against the wall.
"How dare you cheat on me with Millerna!" she yelled.
"I'm not cheating on you with Millerna!" he yelled back. "I'm cheating on you with Eries."
"With Eries?" Hitomi said, dumbfounded. "But Eries is way too proper to do something like that!"
"You'd be surprised."
"I can't believe you Allen! How could you cheat on me?" Hitomi cried.
"You went to Fanelia with Van! Don't think I don't know what you went there for...." However, Allen couldn't finish. Hitomi slapped him so hard he could barely speak.
"We're through, Allen Schezar!" With that, Hitomi ran out of the church, calling Van's name. He wasn't Allen, but atleast he wouldn't cheat on her!
Are Allen and Hitomi really through? Will Van get Hitomi? Will the next chapter be longer? Well, give me atleast 5 GOOD reviews and then I'll tell ya! BWAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!
Ok, so it was short. And it sucked. I was aiming for humor, but it didn't quite turn out as I hoped. Oh well, I'll see what kind of reviews it gets before I take it off. Give me atleast 5 good reviews and I'll write another chapter. Oh yeah, this took place after Hitomi and Allen's argument in episode 23 (19 in the dub).
Forgive Me Father, For I have Sinned
One sunny afternoon, a young man slowly walked towards a church. After assuring himself that no one was watching, he pushed open the big wooden door and walked inside. The church gave the man the creeps. The smell, the religious statues, but he continued anyway.
The man walked along until he spotted something that he had been looking for. The booth thingy where he would be free to confess his problem. Quietly he opened one of the doors and stepped inside, hoping that a priest was there.
"Is there a priest in here?" the man asked.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
On the otherside, a young woman, who was also waiting for a priest. Just when she was about to tell the man on the otherside that she was not the priest, she saw a pair of blue eyes through the screen that seemed very familiar.
"What brings you here, my child?" the woman asked, making her voice sound as male as possible.
"Forgive me Father, for I have sinned. My last confession was....well....never."
"Go on my child," the woman urged. "Tell me your problem."
"I have a girlfriend," the man began. "and I do love her, it's just that I have a feeling that she is cheating on me with a friend....er....rival of mine."
"It's natural to feel that way sometimes."
"But that's not my biggest problem!" the man insisted. "Although she may not be cheating on me, I am cheating on her."
The woman gasped. "With who?"
"A Princess."
The woman was even more shocked. This was beginning to sound like she may be more involved with this man than she thought.
"A Princess of what country?"
The man swallowed hard. "Asturia," he replied.
The woman stood up, got out of her side of the booth, and threw open the door on the otherside. "Allen!" she gasped.
"Oh my god! Hitomi!"
Hitomi, who knew exactly who Allen was cheating on her with, grabbed the collar of his shirt and threw him against the wall.
"How dare you cheat on me with Millerna!" she yelled.
"I'm not cheating on you with Millerna!" he yelled back. "I'm cheating on you with Eries."
"With Eries?" Hitomi said, dumbfounded. "But Eries is way too proper to do something like that!"
"You'd be surprised."
"I can't believe you Allen! How could you cheat on me?" Hitomi cried.
"You went to Fanelia with Van! Don't think I don't know what you went there for...." However, Allen couldn't finish. Hitomi slapped him so hard he could barely speak.
"We're through, Allen Schezar!" With that, Hitomi ran out of the church, calling Van's name. He wasn't Allen, but atleast he wouldn't cheat on her!
Are Allen and Hitomi really through? Will Van get Hitomi? Will the next chapter be longer? Well, give me atleast 5 GOOD reviews and then I'll tell ya! BWAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!
Ok, so it was short. And it sucked. I was aiming for humor, but it didn't quite turn out as I hoped. Oh well, I'll see what kind of reviews it gets before I take it off. Give me atleast 5 good reviews and I'll write another chapter. Oh yeah, this took place after Hitomi and Allen's argument in episode 23 (19 in the dub).