Ane-ue
First Fic, yay! ^^
Background: During the fight at Marineford, after Ace is killed but before Luffy passes out.
Disclaimer: I do not own one piece, because if I did Ace wouldn't have died, the only thing I own is my OC
Thoughts
OC POV
I stared at his face from my prison, tears streaming down his face, his body bloody and bruised. He was crying. I was mad. Somebody made MY Luffy cry, and they were about to get it, and get it good.
Luffy's POV
Ace was dead, I-I was supposed to save him, but he's………… "ACE!!!!!" I screamed as I felt a gentle heat covering my body, then I remembered. I still had my trump card; I slipped my precious straw hat off and took a blue crystal that was hidden under the ribbon. "I'm sorry." I muttered under my breath and chucked the crystal into the midst of the fighting, then a column of blue light erupted from the center of the brawl and I gave in to my tiredness.
OC POV
My prison shattered and I was free. I was pulled out of my tiny crystal prison , suspended in mid-air. I was disgusted by my surroundings, death, blood, hate, and stupid people. I searched for my Luffy from my high perch and found what I was looking for. MY Luffy unconscious next to Ace who was dead, I leaped down from my spot and ran over to my friend. Luffy……he was hurt so badly………I looked up catching Sengoku's attention and glared at him with eyes that would freeze hell over. Someone….was going to pay dearly for this.
Sengoku's POV
After Fire Fist Ace had been taken down Strawhat was yelling ridiculously loud for his brother, useless. I was about to give orders to eliminate the remaining pirates when a beam of blue light erupted not too far from where Strawhat was. But I wasn't prepared for what was about to descend from that light. A...WOMAN?????? In the middle of a war and someone summons a woman, what the hell were they thinking? Suddenly I felt an invisible string pulling my gaze, I followed it, the woman was glaring at me from over where Strawhat and Fire Fist Ace had fallen. I could swear that an aura that was screaming murder was surrounding her, she was getting up, her head was tilted down so that her brown bangs left a shadow hiding her eyes. Then she snapped her head up, her golden-green eyes stabbing at my soul. "SENGOKU! You are going to get and get it good! I will make sure of that!" She had to be joking right? What could a woman, no, a teenage girl do to me? I wasn't sure but, those striking eyes assured me that whatever she had in store for me wouldn't be good. "MEN! GET THE GIRL, NOW!"
OC POV
Sengoku yelled orders to his men, I ignored them. I briefly touched the crystal that hung around my neck, one that was identical to the one I had been held in for eight years. I touched the crystal and it, and my eyes turned sea foam green. I stood next to Luffy and Ace until a column of green light formed around us and we levitated up to the center. My hands started glowing green, and a string of the green energy surrounding my hands wrapped itself around Luffy and Ace and started working its magic. As their wounds began closing I smiled and set Luffy down, now focusing all of my attention on healing Ace. I saw take a sharp breath, and then his breathing evened to a normal pace. I succeeded, Ace was alive. I smiled triumphantly, the green circle vanished and we landed on the ground. I turned to see Sengoku's astonished expression and smirked at his obvious distress. Luffy, Ace, I'l get you out of here. I promise.
Me:whew this is my first ever story critisim welcome but please go easy on me
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Me:See ya next time ^^