Okay, now this is how this is gonna work. DarkFlame {My STH OC-Main} and Shadow are going to review Starkit's Prophecy on DarkFlame's browse through the Warriors block of the Fan Fiction on her Laptop and the rest is what you're gonna read, Now yes, I know what you're gonna bitch about, "Why are you using Sonic characters?" "Why not use your Warriors OC!" and other shit like that, well the reason is, DarkFlame is the one I'm gonna use for the first half, and then it's Shatterstorm's and MoonShade's turn! But now it's DarkFlame and Shadow is her add on for the reviews. Well let's get to it! Shall we?
As I started up my laptop, Shadow picked his seat beside me. Sonic was at my house, but he was outside.
"I'm gonna check Fan Fiction and read some stories-Wait, what the hell is this? "Starkit's Prophecy"? I could make something with a better name than that! God, some peo-" The rest was mumbles as Shadow covered my mouth. "Blah blah blah, purple cat, blah blah blah, what the hell? "Jazzkit"?! What the hell kind of name is that!" Shadow stood up and turned. I then heard a pop sound. "OH NO YOU DON'T! YOU ARE NOT GONNA SHOOT MY LAPTOP BECAUSE OF A STORY! Now let's at least look at it."
After DarkFlame read the first chapter... DarkFlame:
Shadow: "The kind of name someone uses when they think they can name a cat anything. And what is with Starkit's coloring?! Rainbow colored eyes? That's more random than Silver's and ours! Purple fur, really?"
DarkFlame: "Okay, now that you know what our main problems are, we'll tell you what we'd do to fix that."
Shadow: "A cat should not be purple.-No offense to Blaze, but then this is Mobius, that's different. But for Starkit's name and eyes, the name should be something that would make more sense to the daughter of a Medicine Cat and a cat from Shadowclan. It would make more sense. But just because a cat is the daughter of a Medicine Cat doesn't mean that they get some random prophecy that they're gonna save the forest! it just means that cat is a normal cat! No specialties! And her eyes and fur, where the hell did purple and rainbow come from? That's the main problem."
DarkFlame: "Okay, my problem is the fact that Bumblestripe is excluded and his/her name is changed to BumbleFlower! Now don't you agree? And Dawnsparkle? Who exactly is the person that made these cats?! That makes no sense. Sparkle? No. That is just a bad name. I'm going to say it outright because last time I checked, I'm the last of my species and I can make that objection! That is so wrong! What is that supposed to mean? Shimmering eyes and fur? NO! Because it's not a good suffix name!"
Shadow: *nods* "Yes, it fails to be a supportive name to a cat like that. And where did BumbleFlower come from in the first place? Isn't their name supposed to be Bumblestripe?"
DarkFlame: "Yes, yes it is. But that's all for this Starkit's Prophecy review. And the first for a Mobian! Mobians, but you get my point."
DarkFlame and Shadow have explained their problems for Starkit's Prophecy. And so Blaze is ticked because Shadow doesn't like Purple Cats in fictional stories and they are fiction anyway!
Silver is upset because Shadow said that his eyes are kinda ridiculous. Well, that's all for this chapter! Byeeee!