Hi! Sorry, this is another repost! I'd like to thank Draco Olim for pointing out a major issue, which was me calling the separatists ships Imperial Star Destroyers instead of Munificent-class star frigates. I was in such a rush to write my story I didn't double check my star wars facts. Please, if I make any more mistakes, just let me know in the comments and I'll fix them as soon possible! Also, this story takes place around season 2 of the Clone Wars, so Ahsoka is in her first outfit and only has 1 light saber.
Also I wanted to thank my first reviewer, wish I knew your name but thank you, that review meant the world since I'm always worried my stories start out kind of boring. And thank you to Gabby22, Keepscrolling, Soundtrack-Fanatic, Drifting Aura, Rosemachine, and mythologyfreakgirl for favoriting/following my story, you guys rock!
Mission Turned Sour
Ahsoka stood on the bridge of the Twilight looking out into the vast openness of space. They were on their way back from a Trading Mission on Shili, which at first Ahsoka thought it was pretty boring, but while Anakin and Obi-wan were negotiating, she went to look around and met up with some old friends and even made some new ones. Now she was back on the Twilight, staring out into the stars. She gave a sigh as she became lost in thought about her home planet.
"So snips, you ready to go back home?"
Ahsoka jumped a little at the sound of her master's voice come up behind her, she was so lost in thought she hadn't even felt his force signature. Great…I really should be more alert, knowing him he'll hold this against me for the next little bit.
"Not only should you be more alert, but you really should work on your mental shields snips." He smirked giving her a light pat on the back. "I haven't been able to read your thoughts this easily since you first became my apprentice. Is there something wrong?" He asked giving her a concerned frown.
Ahsoka let out an annoyed sigh, "No Skyguy," She said giving him a slight smirk. "I was just thinking about my home planet, and wondering about my old friends, new friends, and if…if I'll ever meet my birth parents again." She whispered the last part and began to turn away and look out into the stars again.
"Well I'm sure someday you'll get to meet them, maybe next time we're on meditation leave we can sneak onto a ship and look for them." He said shifting slightly on his feet and giving her a mischievous smile.
"Thanks Anakin, I'd appreciate that." She said smiling up at him, noticing how his sky blue eyes lit up as she smiled at him.
They both looked up when they heard the sound of the bridge door swish open and Obi-wan came in.
"Well I'd say that mission went well, we got lots of supplies and for once we didn't run into trouble." Obi-wan smiled as he came to stand next to them, giving Anakin a smirk as he looked at him.
"Wha...Master I'm not that bad," Anakin said feigning a look of mock hurt.
"Oh you can be a handle full when you want to be, and that's after you were made a Jedi Knight, don't even get me started on when you were a Padwan."
Ahsoka smiled at Obi-wan and Anakin, silently giggling at their banter. She watched as Obi-wan's grey-blue eyes would shine with mirth and Anakin's sky blue ones would shine with mischievousness. If only all missions could be as easy going as this one. She thought to her-self. I may have not have seen my birth parents, but Anakin and Obi-wan, and ah heck, even Rex, they are my family and I couldn't ask for a better one. She smiled at the thought.
Suddenly the ship jumped out of hyper-space causing everyone to stumble a little.
"Captain Rex," Obi-wan said as he made his way to the front of the bridge. "What have we…" Ahsoka looked over to Obi-wan as she heard him pause, then something else grabbed her attention. She gasped in shock as she looked out into space to see three Munificent-class star frigates blocking their way. "Captain Rex," Obi-Wan began regaining everybody's attention, his face showing determination. "Signal everyone in the ship to be in battle stations and…"
"There's no time sir! They locked on and…"
"Everybody brace for impact!" Ahsoka heard Anakin shout as she stared wide eyed as the three Imperial Star Destroyers weapons powered up and all three fired at once. The force of all three ships was strong enough to throw them all off their feet and the next thing she knew she was being thrown across the bridge, landing hard against the wall. She used the force to try and study herself but before she could regain her balance, the ship was hit again and she was thrown back into the wall. She could vaguely hear Obi-Wan shouting at them to return fire as she got back up and ran to stand next to her master and Obi-Wan.
"Sir!" Rex shouted from the controls. "I'm losing control; the ship can't take much more. We need to get out of here!" Ahsoka gripped tightly to the back of Rex's chair as they continued to be hammered by shots from the Imperial ships. She glanced between her master and Obi-wan as they used the force to keep themselves upright.
"We should land on that planet!" Ahsoka shouted as she pointed out the window to the planet just to the left of them.
"You mean crash land don't ya snips."
"Ever the optimist aren't you Anakin. We can still land this safely." Obi-Wan said loud and calmly.
"Ya right now! But I guaranty you, knowing our luck; by the time we make it to that planet's atmosphere we'll lose most of our controls!"
"Ya well by the time you two are done arguing, we'll all be blown to bits!" Ahsoka shouted in annoyance.
"She's right, Anakin…"
"I'm on it!" Anakin shouted back kicking Rex out of his seat and taking over. "Everybody strap in! This is going to get bumpy!"
Both Obi-wan and Ahsoka ran to an empty chair towards the back of the bridge and strapped in.
"I hope you know what you're doing Anakin!" Obi-wan shouted.
"ha, don't I always master!"
Ahsoka looked over at Obi-Wan as he rolled his eyes. "Just don't get us killed!"
"Well we haven't died yet!"
"The key word there is yet!"
Ahsoka griped onto her chair as tight as she could as the ship got bumpier when they entered the atmosphere; her orange skin becoming a pale orange from the fierceness of her grip. People started to shout and the ship started to shake roughly as they entered the atmosphere.
"Anakin we're coming in to fast!" She heard Obi-Wan shout over the noise of the ship shaking.
"Ya, tell me something I don't know!" Came the snarky reply. "I'm losing control of the ship! I'm going to try to land with minimal damage!"
Ahsoka began to feel panicked as she saw the rapidly approaching ground in front of them and she squeezed her eyes shut in anticipation. She felt the ship hit the ground, the force of the impact sending her forward, putting strain on the restraints holding her in her seat. Then suddenly the straps snapped and she was sent flying forwards. She vaguely heard someone shout her name as she went flying forwards, then everything became a blur. She felt herself go headfirst into something hard, then the ship lurched sideways and she felt herself tumble with the motion. Crashing into the windows, the ceiling and then finally into the side of the control panels as the ship slid to a stop, Ahsoka could feel nothing but pain resonate throughout her whole body and as she tried to push herself up she felt her head swim with pain and dizziness. Black dots started to fill her vision and then she knew no more as she fell into the world of sweet oblivion.
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"AHSOKA!" Obi-Wan shouted as he watched in horror as Ahsoka's safety straps broke and she was sent flying into the back of Anakin's chair.
"Obi-wan, what happened!" Anakin shouted desperately while holding onto his own chair.
In all the chaos, Obi-wan didn't respond, he was more focused on trying to study Ahsoka with the force. Reaching out his hand, Obi-wan was able to successfully hold her steadily to the back of Anakin's chair but then suddenly the ship lurched and his concentration was thrown off as the ship started to roll. He watched helplessly as Ahsoka rolled with the ship, bumping into almost everything then as the ship came to a stop, so did she; landing directly on top of the control panel.
"AHSOKA!" Obi-wan heard Anakin scream in panic as he struggled to unbuckle his safety restraints. Once he was free, he shakily made his way over to Anakin who was now gentle maneuvering Ahsoka onto his lap.
"Anakin," He said quietly and calmly, placing his gloved hand on the back of Anakin's chair. "Get Ahsoka out of the ship, and find a safe place to rest. I'm going to check on the others in the ship and see how many survived." He watched his former padwan nod his head numbly as he slowly stood up, with Ahsoka in his arms and walked out of the ship, he was glad to see no serious injury had befallen his former padwan.
Giving a sigh and rubbing his hand over his tired, bearded face, he looked around the bridge to survey the damage. Rex was starting to stand up on shaky legs, as well as the other clones on the bridge that were also starting to get up from their bumpy crash.
"Captain Rex, are you alright?" Obi-wan asked as he approached the man.
"Yes…sir, I believe I'm still in one piece," Rex said turning to look at Obi-wan.
"Good," Obi-wan gave a small smile, "I'll need to organize your men. Have the men who aren't injured to search the ship for survivors and spare some of them to carry the injured outside. I've sent Anakin to go set up a temporary base until help arrives."
"Yes sir General Kenobi."
"And also leave some of your men here, to see if they can assess the damage done to the ship."
"Not a problem sir." Rex nodded as he went to go organize his men, who were standing towards the back of the bridge, still a little disoriented from the crash.
With his men taken care of, Obi-wan made his way out of the ship in search of Anakin and Ahsoka. I hope she's alright. He thought to himself as he stepped outside and surveyed the planet they landed on. From what he could tell it was a temperate forest planet, lots of trees surrounded the area of the crash, which seemed to be located in the middle of a meadow. Talk about lucky. As Obi-wan stepped down from the ship, he saw Anakin kneeling beside his padwan who he had leaned against a boulder, a couple or feet from the ship.
As he began making his way over, he saw Anakin franticly waving at him. Oh no, that can't be good. He began to lightly jog over to them and slowed down when Anakin started to say something to him.
"Master! I need help…she's not responding!"
Those words sent chills through Obi-wan. Not responding? Is she merely unconscious or has she stopped breathing? Not wasting anytime, Obi-wan came to kneel in front of Ahsoka. Looking at all the scrapes and bruises that littered her body, and the very little response other than a moan when he lightly touched her forehead and chin, made him truly worry for Ahsoka's health. But he couldn't show Anakin, he had to remain calm and keep a level head. He closed his eyes and released his emotions into the force, then went back to focus on the sweet girl lying injured in front of him. "Easy Ahsoka, try not to move." He said comfortingly as he used the force to lessen the girl's pain.
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"Ahsoka…Ahsoka, can you hear me?" Ahsoka's head was ringing; she tried to open her eyes but she could see nothing but darkness. The voice started calling out to her again. "Please Ahsoka, you need to wake up!"I…I know that voice…who…ugh…ugh…my head… "You need to stay with us Ahsoka, come on…wake up snips…" Snips…Only one guy calls me that…Anakin! Ahsoka tried to pull her-self out of the darkness surrounding her but she was so tired and in pain, the more she tried to wake, the more pain she felt, she wanted to stay in the dark, where nothing could get her. "Master! I need help…she's not responding!" Through the force, Ahsoka could feel someone else approaching, their foot-steps quick and light. She tried to open her eyes to see who it was but couldn't find the strength. Everything hurt too much, her head, back and chest. Ughh...what happened…why can't I remember. Lost in her thoughts she vaguely felt someone's hand lightly touch her forehead and another hand on her chin. She tried to turn her head, away from the strangers grasp but pain instantly shot through her head and she let out a low pain filled moan in response. Suddenly she felt warmth spread through her head, easing the pain.
"Easy Ahsoka, try not to move." A new voice spoke, a male one. This voice sounded warm and comforting, not at all like Anakin's panicked one. Who? She knew this voice but she was to out of it to recognize who it was. The stranger released her chin but kept his hand on her forehead, and more warmth began to fill her. The warmth had given her a new found strength and she slowly began to open her eyes. She could see the blurred outline of a man in front of her, and could feel the presence of another beside her. "There you are Ahsoka, how do you feel?" The blurred man asked as he took his hand away from her forehead. She tried to lean forward to get a better look at him but instantly felt pain rip through her abdomen. She squeezed her eyes shut and let out a cry, weakly wrapping her arm around her stomach as the presence beside her wrapped his arm around her, bringing her closer to him. "Easy…easy Ahsoka, let me see." She felt the man in front of her lightly take hold of her arm and move it to her side. She heard a slight gasp, and then felt fingers lightly brush over her abdomen. Even the gentle touch caused her to let out a low moan of pain.
"It's okay snips; he's only trying to help." She heard Anakin say as she felt the arm around her give a comforting squeeze.
Lost in her pain filled haze, Ahsoka barley felt the hand return to her forehead, and the familiar warmth began to flow through her once again. Then she slowly began to feel her mind being pulled into the darkness, an unknown force pulling her into unconsciousness. 'Don't fight it Ahsoka…you are injured and your body needs its rest…Anakin and I are here for you, just rest young one…' Ahsoka heard the gentle voice speak to her in her mind and suddenly she remembered who it was that was offering her comfort through the force. Obi-wan… She spoke back through their connection, 'yes child, rest now…we'll take care of you…' And with one more sleep suggestion from Obi-wan, Ahsoka felt her pain slowing fade away as she was pulled into sweet oblivion.
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Obi-wan sighed in relief as he finally felt Ahsoka slip into a pain free unconsciousness. He slowly removed his hand from her forehead and leaned back to examine the dark purple bruise that was starting to appear over her stomach. She might have internal bleeding; I'll need to check to be sure. Slowly, Obi-wan sat down next to the young padwan who was laying up against the bolder Anakin had carried her to after the crash, with him now sitting on her right side, his arm around her back, holding her close to him.
"What are you doing Obi-wan? Is she okay?" Anakin said, barely keeping the concern out of his voice; his left hand grasping Ahsoka's shoulder tighter, his face a mixture of anger, concern and sadness.
"She has some severe bruising on her lower abdomen Anakin, I need to make she doesn't have any internal bleeding." When Anakin frowned in deeper concern Obi-wan sighed and put his hand on his shoulder. "Don't worry Anakin, I sent her a sleep suggestion, pulling her into unconsciousness, she won't feel a thing." Anakin slightly relaxed at Obi-wan's words and nodded his head in agreement.
"It's better to be sure, go ahead"
Obi-wan gave a small smile and went to move his hands over Ahsoka's small frame. He gingerly touched her bruise, noting how her body slightly trembled at his touch. Gentle putting his whole palm on her abdomen, he called upon the force, using it to sense how bad the injury was. Concentrating, he couldn't feel any loose blood flowing around her organs, just tender muscles working desperately to heal themselves.
Sighing in relief, Obi-wan removed his palm and gave Anakin a tired relieved smile. "She doesn't have internal bleeding." He almost laughed at the relieved smile that came from Anakin's face, but quickly became serious again. "But Anakin, she is severely hurt and without proper medical treatment, she could still die." They both looked down in concern at Ahsoka's sleeping face. "May the force be with her."
So what did you guys think! Be honest now. This was the first time I've ever written a star wars fanfiction, and to be honest the most I know about star wars is from watching the clone wars cartoon, so if you're a die hard star wars fan, I hope I didn't offend you if the characters seem ooc, or if I lacked details in certain areas of the story. Anyways I hope you enjoyed this first chapter and I hope you review. Hopefully I don't get writers block or lose interest like I did with my other stories but follow/favorite and I'll do my best to keep up dating.
May the force be with you!