Jedi Master 325 here with a rewrite of Nightmare on Johnson Street. When I wrote the original back in June 2017, it was a little rusty compared to the other fanfics I wrote. So I decided to redo it and make it even more suspenseful.
Summary: A rewrite of the fanfiction I wrote last June. A serial killer is wreaking havoc in Bellwood, killing girls ages 10-18. When Gwen is abducted by the psychopath, it's up to Ben and Kevin to rescue her.
Ben 10 UA: Nightmare on Johnson Street: The Revised Edition
Chapter One
It was another normal day in Bellwood. Ben was at home watching the Sumo Slammers marathon on Tv. Suddenly, an emergency news bulletin came up. " We interrupt this broadcast to bring you this emergency news bulletin. A serial killer has been seen here in Bellwood. This killer has kidnapped and murdered 20 girls ages 10-18. Folks, if you have daughters. Make sure they are safe at home as the town is issuing a mandatory curfew until this killer is caught. That is all." Ben turned off the Tv. " This sounds like something I should be investigating." He said as he grabbed his jacket. " Ben, I really wish you would let the police handle this matter." Ben's mother Sandra Tennyson said as she watered the plants. " 20 girls are dead so far mom. I can't sit by and do nothing." Ben said as he left to meet up with Gwen and Kevin at .
" So I'm proposing that we do a stake out until the killer makes his move. Once we spot the killer making his move on an unsuspecting girl, we'll capture him." " Sorry Ben, but I have karate practice. Plus I can't be out after dark remember." Gwen said as she put her book down. " I'll do the stakeout with you Tennyson. Right after I drop Gwen off for karate practice." Kevin said as he tossed his empty smoothie cup in the trash. " So it's settled. After you drop Gwen off, you and I will do a stake out and put an end to this psychopath's killing spree." Ben said as he tossed his empty smoothie cup in the trash too.
Meanwhile in an apartment building that had been condemned for health code violations, the serial killer was looking over at his latest hostage who was currently tied to a chair and gagged. She was no more than 16 years old with blonde hair. The killer himself was a tall and burly looking guy. He wore a dark green long sleeved shirt with a brown vest, dark gray sweatpants, and a hockey mask from the movie Friday the Thirteenth. walking up to his captive, the killer took out the dagger and ( Warning: This part will get extremely graphic. Skip over this part if you do not have the guts to read it.) thrust it into the girl's chest. The poor girl screamed through her gag as the killer drove his dagger further up her chest, laughing with malicious glee as blood started to pool onto the floor. After the girl was dead, the killer untied her corpse and set it on the floor. Taking out his machete, he hacked the poor girl's corpse to bits and wrapped it in a sheet. Attached to the sheet was a note that read:
Ben Tennyson,
You must know that you'll never be able to find me. Beware, for your pretty cousin is next on my list! Hahahahahahaha!
-Bellwood Serial Killer.
After tossing the dead body into a dumpster, the killer headed back to his place and cleaned up, after changing into a fresh set of clothes, the killer walked over to a bulletin board where he kept photos of his victims. Taking out a red marker, he drew an X over the picture of the girl he had just murdered. He grinned darkly at the picture of his next victim, Gwen Tennyson. He knew that she would be difficult to capture with her expert karate skills and her anodite powers. Luckily, he had a drug that would cut off her powers for 24 hours. He also had a bottle of chloroform on him to subdue her long enough for him to drug and kidnap her. Putting on his hockey mask, the killer set out to find his target.
And that is the end of chapter one. Leave a review, and I will get chapter two started.
-Jedi Master 325
