This is my latest fanfic. Please read and review. Please. No flames, but suggestions, please. Just one review will make me happy.
"Hey, who disturbed my sleep?" a black WindClan she-cat hissed into the night. Then she noticed she was alone and in a strange forest.
"Huh? Where am I? I know this isn't in WindClan territory."
"No, Nightcloud, you're not," mewed a rough voice. The black she-cat narrowed her eyes.
"Breezepelt? That's you? Stop playing games. Where are we?"
"In the forest of the Hawkfrost show, mother. I'd thought that you would know."
"The Hawkfrost show? What's that?"
"It's when Hawkfrost captures two she-cats and forces them to go on a date with him if they win the show."
"sounds fun."
"Yeah! Come with me. It's very fun."
"Sounds suspicious," Nightcloud growled.
"No, it's not. If you don't come, I'm going to have to take you by force," Breezepelt warned.
"Crowy would rescue me!"
"Actually, he wouldn't," Breezepelt said. "he'd be too busy rescuing Leafpool."
"What?!" 'Leafpool's here too?'
"Leaf-poo's here? Why?" all of a sudden, Nightcloud heard a loud scream and a yowl- a happy, deranged yowl.
"Who was that?"
Breezepelt thought for a moment and said, "Leafpool and…Tigerstar."
"Tigerstar's here?"
"Yes, he and Brokenstar are the security guards to keep the captured she-cats from escaping. Don't worry, you'll be taken to a padded cell and tied up so you can't hurt yourself. It won't hurt unless you resist or if Tigerstar's feeling revengeful today. He's the one that ties you up. Don't worry, it's only a few certain cats he hates."
Nightcloud hesitated.
"Okay. It can't be that bad," she assured herself. Breezepelt chuckled.
"You're in for a surprise."
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