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CLARE'sPOV.
I was so excited. Eli, Adam, Ali, Dallas (ew), Connor, Jake, katie and I were all going up to Ali's cabin in the woods for winter break. I hate dallas with all my guts but He is Ali's new boyfriend so I had to deal with Dallas if I wanted to come. Ali is my Bff but apparently she said if we don't like Dallas, we could get over it. This is my first overnight trip with my boyfriend Eli. Ali says the slopes are to snowed out to go sledding but it was still gonna be fun hanging in the house. Were now riding in the limo. Eli is sitting beside Adam and Connor talking about dude stuff. Jake and Katie were sitting in the corner just snuggling up. YUCK! The only reason Jake is going is because mom wouldn't agree to let me go unless Jake went. Ali's parents are off on a business trip and told her she could use the cabin. There not responsible parents, but my mom still thinks there gonna be there. Ali and Dallas are sitting on one side of the limo just making out, and I am sitting here by myself with my ipod earbuds in listening to About you now by: Miranda Cosgrove. Dallas, who's lips were attached to Ali's face was eyeing me the entire ride. I just sat there and kept Eli from talking to him. I knew if Eli and Dallas acually acknowleged each others existance there would be a HUGE fight. Eli was still mad at Dallas for Upsetting me on my birthday and Dallas still blamed Eli and me for his Hockey season being ruined. I hadnt even told Eli about The fact Dallas tried to kiss me. I knew he would really brake his face if that happened, and I like happy and lovey Eli more than phycotic rage Eli.
When we pulled up to the cabin Adam, Connor, Jake, and Katie were the first to pile out. Ali got out before Dallas. Eli then slid out giving dallas and evil look. Me and Dallas were left when Eli grabbed my hand and tugged me up out of there. He pulled me around to the other side of him so I wouldn't be near Dallas. What a gentlemen! We all walked into the house and set our suite cases down.
"So this is the famous Casa de la Ali," Jake said with excitement. "Yep! There are 3 double bedrooms and 3 single bedrooms. So Me and Dallas, Eli and Clare, Jake and Katie, and connor and adam can have there own rooms." "Cool," we all said in unison.