here is another story by me
Help me.
points up thats the title
Ch1
Raven was in the kitchen of the Titan Tower watching Beast Boy and Cyborg fighting over if tofu was good or not.
This is my life, Raven thought with a grim scowl, At least it is pretty interesting. Never dull.
"You okay Raven?" Beast Boy asked seeing her scowl.
"Yes," Raven said in her usual monotone, "I'm fine."
Beast Boy nodded and went back to fighting with Cyborg.
"Friend Raven," StarFire said apearing out of no where, "Do you wish to go to the mall of shopping with me later? Maybe we can do the 'Hanging out'."
"No thanks," Raven said, "I'm fine."
StarFire looked sad at this but when she asked Robin if he wanted to go shopping he said sure. She was happy after that.
Raven got up and went to her room to read.
Raven was reading a very interesting book, it was about witches and demons. Then she heard a voice say, "Raven."
Raven dropped the book and saw a ghost by her window.
"Raven," it said again.
Raven looked at the ghost and saw that it was a man. A man that looked like he was in his early 40's. The man had brown hair and blue eyes and was 6 feet tall.
"Yes," Raven said, "What do you want?"
"I need your help," the man said, "I need your help moving on."
"I don't understand," Raven said, "How do I help?"
"By helping me kill the one that killed me," the man said.
So is that a good first chapter?