This is my first fanfic, so I would really appreciate it if you would give me the criticism on what I need to work on and how to write and stuff like that. Thanks.
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'...' Thoughts
Momo, 1st Person POV
Summary: Hinamori Momo has finally graduated from high school, and Hitsugaya moves into town. Will love strike?
Disclaimer – I do not own Bleach.
Ch 1.
This is so frickin' boring. When the heck is this ceremony going to be over?
"They have worked intensely hard, so please give a big hand to our Otomoya H graduates!" Mrs. Kumoyi announced as an applause thundered throughout the auditorium.
Finally! I took my cap off and tossed it in the air and then watched as it fell right onto my lap.
I laughed with my best friend Rukia. We were finally out of high school! Yes!
"Go graduates!" I heard Ichigo yell at the back of the room.
As we walked out of the auditorium, Renji, Ichigo, Rukia, and I talked about the big plans that night.
"Wait… where are we going again?" Renji asked as he scratched his tattooed head.
"Ayame's baka," said Ichigo as he thumped Renji on the head with his fist.
"Owwwww!"
"Stop whining like a baby! You're a man so act like a man!"
"I'm not a baby! I'm a man!" Renji held out his arms in a macho form looking "manly".
Rukia and I started to giggle but immediately stopped because Renji gave us this huge death glare, but then Rukia burst out laughing. Once I saw the look on Renji's face, I did too. He had this dorky look that looked like an evil troll her something. He looked hilarious! If he was trying to look mean, he would need a lot of work.
"Ichigo!"
we heard in the distance. I turned my head around to see Orihime,
Ichigo's gorgeous girlfriend.
(A/N: I know some of you hate this
couple, but it's not going to be that major.)
Ichigo turned his head and waved, "Hey, Orihime!"
Orihime has long orange hair with two clips on each side. She's really nice but really dense at the same time. Orihime Inoue is her real name, but Matsumoto-san adopted her into her family as a sister, so now Orihime is Orihime Matsumoto.
"Hey, Hime-chan! Ack! I got to get home for my graduation party. See ya at 7!" I yelled.
Orihime and Rukia waved bye.
Rukia Kuchiki is my bestest of best friends. We've known each other since forever. She has shoulder length black hair and has a huge crush on Renji. It's so obvious. I'm pretty sure that Renji likes her too.
WHAM!
"Oww…" I rubbed my forehead. Darn you stupid lamppost.
I have this huge habit of bumping into things as I get lost in my thoughts. I have really got to stop doing that.
Oh! Hey, look, I'm home! Heheh…
I slowly opened the door, afraid of what was going to happen. Once I did though, I shut my eyes and counted, '1…2…3…'
"AAAAH!!!! It's Momo! She's home!!!"
"Momo!!! Congratulations!"
"How was the ceremony? Oh my gosh! Was it fun? How did you feel?"
I fell into a huge crowd of people congratulating me and asking me questions.
"Uh… I got to..."
Ding-Dong!
Ooooh. Must be another guest. Perfect timing.
"I gotta get the door!" I shouted above all the noise. People stopped bombarding me and delighted themselves with the treats as I went to open the door.
When I did, I saw the cutest guy in front of me. He was a little bit taller than me with sliverish whitish spiky hair. He had the most gorgeous green eyes that sparkled when you looked at them. He looked totally hot in a crisp, blue polo and a pair of black slacks.
And here I stood looking like a total idiot. I could feel my cheeks burn up and my face growing red. Plus, I had this huge grin on my face, which didn't make it any better.
I watched as he slowly leaned towards me, closer and closer.
'Oh my gosh! He's going to kiss me! But we barely even know each other!! Scratch that, I don't even know his name!'
"Hey, are you okay? Your face is red."
"U-um, yeah… I-I'm fine. Yeah. T-totally fine! I'm peachy as a p-peachy peach! Eheheheh….. I'm Hinamori Momo by the way!
I sighed as I was thinking, 'I am such a dork.'
Ok, well this is my first chapter… as you can see. I hope it was good! By the way... This doesn't really make sense unless you read the next chapter...
I look forward to reading your reviews.
Xoxo MimiMichie
