Hihi! This is my first fanfic, so go easy on me .
AND REVIEW! I need to know what I need to improve on :P
Prologue:
She sighed. Are women that inferior to men? What's wrong with women bringing fortune to men? Glaring angrily at the sign hanging above the doorway, she slowly raised her hand to reach for the doorknob. She paused and quickly walked over to the shining gold doorframe. Fixing her long, flowing, chocolate brown hair, her green, emerald eyes shined with determination.
The sound of footsteps echoed around the hall and the sound of the squealings of girls echoed in the hallway. Gritting her teeth at the missed chance, she ran around the corner and off back to class.
I know it's incredibly short, but the chapters will be longer .