Redoing most of the early chapters, let me know what you would like to change in the reviews. Also editing stuff for continuity.
"Pearl!" Steven called, "Amethyst, Garnet!?"
"In here" came Pearl's response. Steven walked into the living room and saw Pearl, Garnet, and Amethyst on the couch. "You're just in time Steven, we are about to leave to go defeat some gem wolfs that have infested an old spire. Garnet thought it would be good for you to come along." Garnet nodded approvingly. They walked over to the transporter and teleported out to the spire.
"Oh great, their everywhere." Diamond thought to himself, "Ahh!" he screamed as the bright light of the transporter appeared just down the hill. He ducked down behind a rock seeing as four people appeared.
The Gems arrived to the sight of hundreds of gem wolfs. "Steven, stay back." Pearl said.
"These wolfs would eat you alive without thinking about it." Amethyst said, pulling out her whip.
"Amethyst!" Pearl yelled.
"What?" Came Amethyst's reply.
"There is no time for arguing." Garnet cut in. The three older gems started to attack the gem wolfs with little effort.
"AH HELP" Steven cried as a wolf pounced onto him. Then the wolf howled with pain then exploded as a clear arrow punctured it's side. Steven looked up the hill and saw someone run away. "Wait, come back!" Steven called.
"Steven!" Pearl cried, "are you ok?" She ran up and hugged him.
"I'm fine, but who was that?" Steven asked, pulling the arrow out of the ground from where the wolf had been.
"Who was who?" Garnet asked. After getting only a confused look from Steven as if he didn't know what to say she took the arrow from him and they went home. "Pearl, Amethyst, we need to talk." Garnet said opening the door to her room. The other two followed her leaving Steven to his own thoughts. "This arrow, it could only have come from a gem." Garnet said to her two friends once inside.
"Isn't that a good thing?" Amethyst asked.
"If they were looking for company they wouldn't have run, I am just glad they didn't kill Steven." Garnet said, "I think that we need to find who's arrow this is, and maybe Steven should stay here until then."
"Yeah, you're right." Amethyst said.
"Other than Steven it has been so long since we last had another Gem live here." Pearl said, "It is almost sad. Ever since Rose..." They left it at that and walked out into the house. "Steven." Pearl said as they exited.
"I am going to the arcade if there is nothing else to do." Steven said
"Go ahead." Said Garnet. "Enjoy it Steven, because until we find who's arrow this is, it is your last time out of here." She thought.
"What do you think that thing is made out of, it looks like glass." Amethyst said.
"It's not glass." Garnet said and hit it against the wall, "maybe diamond..." She looked at the arrow, unharmed by the hit.
I am working on it, reviews, suggestions, and ideas help. Also I will answer any questions you drop in the reviews.
