Return of Eclipse

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Also, a good review from TheArchive mad me realize a problem with the style of writing and how short it was. So I've decided to redo the prologue, mainly because it was rushed in the first place.

Enjoy

Prologue: Brother?

Celestia awoke from her circular cushion next to the fireplace, which was still smoldering from the night before. She went outside on her balcony to see her sister, Luna, admiring her night. Luna noticed her sister's presence and her horn glowed as the moon started to lower and she turned to Celestia.

"Did you sleep well sis?"

Celestia nodded and said "Yes, ready to turn in?"

Luna yawned and said "Yeah, you don't know how tired I am"

Celestia's horn glowed and the sun began to rise into the sky. Then before Luna could turn around to leave she and Celestia saw a figure upon the horizon. It started to get larger as the figure drew ever closer to the castle. Suddenly, in the blink of an eye, the figure had flown over the castle wall startling a few guards. The intruder then landed in front of the two. He was a black alicorn slightly taller than Celestia, with a long shaggy white mane, and he had eyes that were an icy silver color. He looked down mainly at Celestia and then Luna his wings splayed and almost blocking the sun from view. His wings then folded to his side, which then showed his cutie mark, a black orb with a white glow around it. He started to slowly walk toward Celestia, coming inches away from her face. He looked at her for second with an almost pentrating gaze before wraping his head around her neck in a loving brace wile saying in a slightly deep voice

"I have missed you very much sisters"

Celestia could only struggle to say "Brother?"

The black alicorn could only chuckle as he said "It has been a long time Tia"

He looked at Luna who was awestruck and said "I see you have been growing ever since I was gone Little Luna"

Luna blew up a little and said "I'm not little, I'm a full grown mare"

The alicorn chuckled again and said "I know, but you'll always be my little sis" as he kissed her forehead, causing Luna to slightly blush.

Celestia looked at him with an alomost pleading look and said "So. . . are you here to stay now?"

He looked at them and said "Yes"

Celestia's eyes started to let loose tears of joy as she hugged him back and said "I missed you Eclipse"

Then Luna ran up and hugged him too saying "Me too. brother"

He hugged them both and said "Don't worry, I'm never going to leave you two again"

Suddenly, a guard busted through the doors to Celestia's room to find the siblings in loving embrace. They looked at each other decided best to keep the other guards away and leave the rulers on their own.

Celestia looked at her brother and asked "So, what all have you done during your travels?"

He looked at her and said "It's a long story. . ."

His stomach growled and he continued with a chuckle". . .let's discuss this over breakfast"

End of Chapter.