Well, for all of those who read the story the first time, here is a rewrite. Should be better.
If anyone would like to read the first version ask and I'll post it when I finish it a little more.
"Why, why can't I remember? What is my true purpose for being here?"
"Ultima's army is back!" Zero is awoken by the sound of the alarm and intercom. "And they have another leader!" 'How many of them do I have to send packing before they stop?' Zero thought to himself.
"Zero come to the command room."
"On my way." He dashes out the door. "What's the situation?"
"There are hundreds of them this time and the one leading them looks like… like… FEFNIR?!"
"What, but he was here just awhile ago, or is it a copy? Can you confirm it's him or is it a copy?"
"No, I'm sorry to say it, but it is him, wait… We have just detected something else coming this way."
"Does it look like a threat at the time or become one in the near future?"
"I don't know, but whatever it is, it's in range of the scopes, shall we put him on the monitor?"
"Yes." The monitor clicks on and they see black reploid running through the forest. "He's fast, but right now we have bigger fish to fry. Where is the enemy coming from?"
"Huh, oh, they're coming from the south, southwest region."
"Ok, I'll go and intercept." Zero says
"Be careful."
"Don't worry, Ciel."
"There's just so many, where do they all come from!" Zero complained.
"DIE ZERO!" Fefnir cried out as he started shooting at him from above.
"Why are you doing this, your mission is to protect humans, not slay them."
"I've changed, I'm a new reploid. I don't care what happens to the rest of them."
"Do you not even care that you're working for the one who caused all of this?" Zero asked.
"No, the human race can die out for all I care." Fefnir said smiling. 'He's lost it.' Zero thought
The battle continued with no end in sight. Zero was feeling weak but Fefnir looked like he had just taken a nap. "I don't get it. He's taken more hits, exhausted more energy than I, yet, he doesn't look tired at all."
"You just don't get it, do you Zero. I'm stronger than you now. Ultima and I are connected; we share each other's power. Combined we have limitless power and energy." Fefnir started to charge up his fire cannon. Zero was getting ready to dodge but out of nowhere one of Ultima's soldiers grabbed him. "Uhk… what the…"
"Now die Zero!!" Fefnir let out the blast. Zero managed to kill the soldier but wasn't able to move in time. He took a full head-on blow. He went out like a light. "This will end it once and for all. Haaaa…" Fefnir shot another incredible blast. Unconscious Zero couldn't do a thing. Just at that moment the blast was reflected back at Fefnir. He put up his arms to block the shot and was still knocked back by it. "Who and how?!" He exclaimed. "Where is Ultima? I sense him somewhere in this area."
"Who is it that want's to know?" Fefnir asked the voice, but there was only silence. "I'll ask again who the hell wants to know?!" he said again with the sound of impatience in his voice. Silence. "Ahhh, you're annoying… huh! Hey, he's mine!" The Resistance soldiers were taking Zero back to the base. "GET BACK HERE WITH MY KILL!" he shouted.
"You have other things to worry about Fefnir!"
"Hey, how do you know my name?"
"You once defended us from the ones X called extremists. You and the Four Guardians. We all looked up to you, Leviathan, Harpuia, and even our fallen comrade, Phantom. But after Ultima came, destroyed Neo Arcadia and took control there were very few of us left. Leviathan and Harpuia came looking for survivors, but not you. You went straight to Ultima and asked to join him, asked for more power, asked and sold your "soul" to the devil!"
"Who in the hell are you?!"
"We must get him to the repair room quickly." Ciel said.
"How could he do this…? Harpuia, HARPUIA!"
"Huh… oh sorry, I was just thinking the same thing Leviathan. What I still don't get is what that voice was talking about."
"Oh, your right, I had forgotten about that. Maybe he's a reploid that lived at Neo Arcadia, or maybe he was someone who wanted to join us, or…"
"Or maybe," Harpuia interrupted. "Maybe he's something else."
"That's impossible, you saw the same screen we all did, only a reploid could be that fast. What else could it be?" She asked him.
"I don't know what can run like that, but I don't think he's a reploid. I've never seen one that fast, have you?"
"No."
"Let's not worry about it." Just then there was a loud bang from above. "Fefnir is still up there, we should go teach him a lesson he won't soon forget."
"Yes, I agree Harpuia. Let's get him." They make their way up and find nothing, nobody was up there. "Where are they?"
"Sorry to say but Fefnir's dead." A voice says.
"Who are you, what do you want?"
"As for who, right now that's none of your business. What I want, is to know if Zero is ok?" A shadowy figure appears from behind a tree. "And maybe a place to rest for awhile."
"So stranger, what brings you here?" Ciel asked.
"I actually was following a signal of Ultima, but unfortunate for me it was just Fefnir."
"You'd have to be pretty strong to succeed where Zero didn't." Leviathan said smiling.
"No. The only difference between Zero and I fighting Fefnir was that I have a special weapon he didn't, but I refuse to go into details with that." He said trying to avoid the fact that Leviathan was eye-balling him, but she stopped and looked away after his last remark. 'Damn, I thought I had found myself a better opponent.' She said to herself in her mind.
"So," Harpuia continued. "What happened to you, and what are you made of?"
"I don't speak of the past because I can't remember all of it, just fragments here and there. As for the suit, I'm a technological genius as well as a scientist. So, the suit is made up of certain chemicals and metals along with nano bots and a few wires here and there."
"If it is made up of nano bots, then why are there wires involved?" Cerveau wondered.
"I attached them to my brain and nervous systems with the wires. I can call them out at anytime and they increase my strength, speed, endurance, and give me abilities and weapons."
"Fascinating. May we have a look?" The stranger thought awhile and nodded his head yes. Then he, Cerveau, and Ciel all left the room.
"I'm going to go check on Zero."
"Ok Harpuia. I'll just stay here and stare at the wall some more." Leviathan said sarcastically.
"Zero, I can't believe Fefnir did what I could not. The strange thing is I don't hate him for doing it; I hate you for letting him. Oh well, hatred doesn't last forever. Please wake up soon, my friend." Harpuia left the room.
"Uhn… Where am I?"
"That's a very hard question to answer Zero." A shadowy figure walks around Zero.
"Who are you and how do you know my name?" Zero keeps staring at the figure circling him.
"That, I can't answer." The figure moves into some light, but he only appears as a silhouette of whoever he was. Even though Zero couldn't see his face, he felt as though he knew him somehow.
"You can't seem to answer any of my questions. So why are you here?"
"I'm here because of the one who came to the resistance base as you were blacking out." Zero raised his eyebrow. "He's not who he seems to be. He's… he's a spy for Ultima!" The figure says in a dramatic voice.
"Oook, and you know this how?" Zero asked not impressed.
"Because, I'm the one that sent him to infiltrate your base." The shadowed figure reveals himself. Zero can only look in utter astonishment as the shadow revealed itself.
"It's not possible… your dead." Zero said frightened at what he saw.
"Guess I wasn't dead enough, old friend."
"Don't you ever call me that!" Zero makes for his saber to find it not there. "Huh."
"Weapons don't exist in this world," he says, making a scythe appear out of nowhere. "At least for you they don't. HA HA HA HA HA!"
And there you have it, the first chapter. Please review. No flames please. Next chapter will be up soon.