I don´t own Naruto.Also English isn´t my native language so don´t be too hard on me.
Electrical girl
Chapter 1:Electrical girl
It was a dark, moonless night. The forest was so dimly lit that you could hardly find your way out. Evan the animals were sleeping and the few that ware awake didn´t make any noise.
The only thing that disturbed the silence was a sound of footsteps. And lots of shouts such as:
„Die, demon brat", and „Now you´re dead".
The person those shouts were intended for was actually a little girl around five years old. She had long waist-sized bright blue hair, bright light blue almoust white eyes and she had a huge cut that whant from her chest to her shoulder and the blood that was dripping out of it soaked her whole dress red. In her eyes you could easily read the expression of pure horror as she´s being chased by the angry mob and her feet were full of cuts, hits and she could barely find strenght to go on.
She began to slow down which the villagers noticed soon enough, so some of the faster ones namely shinobis that were supposed to stay out of situations like this sped up and easily appeard right infront of her. She was so tired that she didn´t evan had strenght to scream, she just collapsed on the ground.
Shinobis smiled thinking this will be easy kill. They started approaching her still waering confident smirks that is untill sparks started forming around her soon turnimg into real electricity.
All that the villagers who were still approaching them saw was a flash that enlightented whole forest followed by a very load exploasion.
The girl just got up and started running again using the mobs current shock.
She soon camed on the clearing in the forest. Whem she looked around she saw that she was completly sorounded and she had nowhere to go.
While the villagers were prety confidant about they current situation, they still were careful not to end up like those ninjas before them that were burned to crisp. So they started coming closer. At first they were reluctant to speed up but closer they camed, and nothing happened they becomed more confidant thus resulting in greater speed of movument.
Girl, on the other hand, was prety ready to give up. She was tired her body hurted like hell every time she moved, she was completly surrounded and, thanks to that cut, she was losing a large amount of blood. She just layed there on the ground, slowly waiting for her death by the angry mob while drifting to the unconsciusness. But then, suddenly, there was a flash of light in her mind and she slowly started gaining energy and with it will to fight. She didn´t know from where this new energy camed from, but she didn´t care anyway. With new energy camed also huge unexplaineble anger, anger like wich she had never experienced before in her short life.
She got up, wich suprised the mob, but what suprised them evan more ware her eyes. And while more and more electricity gathered around her, the adults simple stared like idiots in her eyes. They suddenly turned yellow and there was a line going from top to bottom of her eyes going directly trough her eyelids. That had a decent efect on the villagers and evan greater one on the shinobis who didn´t know what kind of Doujutsu was that.
Everybody present on the clearing at that time suddenly felt heat radaiting from the girl. So they diverted they gazes of her eyes wich helped notice a massive amount of electricity around the girl.
Suddenly, she screamed a blood-thirsty scream that chilled the mob to their bones, while the ninjas felt so much killing intent that they nearly fainted. In fact, weaker ones did faint.
More and more of electricity gathered around her and that with the fact that her close were ripped to pieces, made her look unreal like a goddess or something. That is untill all that electrical power exploded on the their heads. Exploasion she coased was so massive that, not only did destroy the clearing, bit anhileted around half of the forest.
Evan some time after the exploasion smoke covered hole that yoused to be forest. There liening in the middle of the hole was that little girl. While she appeared unconscius, she was actualy sleeping unknown of what awaites her in the future.
Well that´s that. Like I said before the chapter, I am not a native speaker of English language. Also, this is my first fic. And for those who think that this is overused beginning or something like that, I can´t say much exept that a) they don´t have to read if they don´t like it and b) with over 130,000 Naruto fanfics it really isn´t easy to find original theme. And besides evan tough the theme is same each writer writes differently and has different ideas about the development of the story. Also this is first chapter so it may be little short but I´ll try to keep chapters longer in the future. And one more thing, please R&R PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE