How Twilight Should Have gone. *DISCLAIMER: This is not Stephanie Meyers exact dialogue from Twilight, this is a made up version of how it should have gone. It has all same characters and stuff just different story.
This starts of after Bella just got bit by James and Edwards is about to suck it out. And Bella has lost a lot of blood and could die any minute. And only Edward is there not the rest of the cullens. By the way Edward and alice already killed james, so this is after that.
Bella POV*
My hand, My hand was burning. It was like being stuck into a fire and not being pulled out. It was like my skin was sizzling . I could feel it. But I could not see the fire anywhere. That same burn spread through my veins like a wild fire being spread in a dry forest. All I could think of was that horrible feeling. I started to concentrate harder and harder and I could hear others around. I did not dare to open my eyes, and expose them to the harsh fire encased around me.
"Edward you're going to have to do it." Alice said in a rush.
"No, I can't I'm not that strong. We have to wait for Carlisle." Edward Said
"Edward, we have no time, I can see it now, the venom spreading, I can see Bella as a vampire." Alice said
"I'm not going to risk Bella's life if I do it. We must wait for Carlisle." Edward said
"He's not coming Edward. Carlisle still thinks Bella is with me and Jasper, he doesn't know." Alice snapped
This is what I wanted, to be a vampire and its happening. Edward cannot suck the venom out. This is what I want! "No, No let it spread!" I screamed out.
I tried to concentrate harder to hear an answer, but as soon as I spoke to them the fire ceased all my concentration again, and all I can think about is the burning pain growing inside me. But once more I tried again to listen.
"Edward, I think it's best to let it spread. She's lost to much blood already, if you suck the venom out there's no way she can survive this." Alice said.
"Alice I don't know , what if I could save her, but what if I couldn't? I guess it wouldn't make a difference the damage is too much." Edward said.
I smiled in my triumph, but the burning did not go down one degree. I don't know how many seconds or minutes, or hours went by, but I started to get stronger. I could feel my bones coming back together, my heart beat increased. Instead of a solid thump-tha-thump, it was now thump-thump-thump like humming birds wings flying away in the wind. After what felt like an eternity I started to feel the burn cease from my heart to finger tips, leaving me with a nice cool sensation. Then as I completely felt cool and refreshed, I opened my eyes and gazed above me in wonderstruck.