MY STORY
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PROLOUGE WAKE UP CALL:
"matt wake up its time for school" my brother says to me while I was already up and ready for the day so I head out after saying" goodbye nick see you after school" I headed out the door and grabbed my bike and rode it about halfway to school. but I saw something funny looking in the trees on the way to school so I stop and I walk to the treeline and I look back to it and I say" what the hell is that thing". so I call up my friend Kelvin and we walk back to it and I decide to risk walking through it and I just see….. a forest on the other side so I walk back through and say " Kelvin come on there is nothing but forest'' he seems a bit worried so I grab his arm and pull him through I say" don't be a big baby" I reach in to my bag and pull out my fire works and lighter along with my grandpas combat knife and an antique black powder pistol and I go" ha anything in this forest will have to deal with me to get to you boss". It seemed to be a endless stretch of forest so I reach into my bag and pull out some water bottles and a box of protein bars and give 2 of each to Kelvin and I say" eat while we can i don't know when we will exit this forest" he eats and drinks then hands them back to me and we start jogging./
PONYVILLE: CURRENT TIME 0500 HOURS
The main six were walking around town talking to the other ponies when a bunny that looks scared comes up to fluttershy and starts talking to her/fluttershy there is two strange creatures going through though one seems protective of the other he gives the smaller one food and water.\\fluttershy starts cowering behind rainbow dash that looks concerned for her so she asks" flutters why are you scared" fluttershy says" well my bunny friend tells me there are two strange creatures are walking through the everfree forest" twilight looks surprised she thought that there were no creatures that fluttershy's animal friends have not met yet so she says'' lets go find these creatures and catalog them.
END OF PROLOUGE
Well tell me if this should be continued.