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Ava had long blonde hair just like her mothers, as well as her mothers slender body, at 17 her life was becoming more and more difficult. She didn't realise how cruel that the world could really be, so much she kept hidden from her mother and father. They were always too busy with their jobs to notice anyway, looking in her mirror she tilted her head, she was wearing a short black dress with red lipstick which looked great against her blonde hair and pale skin. Ava was glad her dad wasn't here to see what she had chosen to wear, it was her friends 18th party tonight. Her and her friends had managed to get hold of fake ID so that they could go clubbing, she had always been reckless in partying. Tonight she was planning on getting completely out of it, maybe ending in pulling an older guy.
Whilst she finished getting ready Sam was downstairs sipping at her tea, she was growing more concern about her daughter as months went by. Work was becoming stressful and she had no time for Ava anymore, she had noticed her daughter becoming more reckless, more stupid, most Saturday nights she would go out to parties and drinking with friends. Tom couldn't be anymore unhappy with Ava behaving the way she did, they were always arguing about it. Tom cared so much for her, that was what it came down to. Tom caring, he didn't want anything to happen to his little girl.
Sam heard the stairs creaking and turned around to see her daughter coming down the stairs,
"Ava, what the hell are you wearing? You look like you're going to a strip club"
"I'm 17, I'll wear what the heck I want" Ava replied quickly, throwing her bag over her shoulder and putting on her heels.
"Exactly you're 17! And until you're 18 you will do as I say, you're living under my roof" Sam retorted, standing up and moving towards Ava.
"What you gonna do? Throw me out? It's not like you and Dad are never home anyway" Ava pushed her way past her mother and proceeded to the door,
"Excuse me?" Sam followed her, but she was too late, her daughter had already opened the door and begun walking down the path.
"See you tomorrow" Ava shouted back, before disappearing round the corner. Sam slammed the door and snatched her phone off the coffee table to text Tom, why was Ava acting this way? She used to be so happy, such a good child, then all of a sudden. Bam, teenage strops and late nights, Sam didn't know if this was normal or if it wasn't. Half way through texting Tom she stopped, maybe the last thing Ava needed was Tom going off the rails with her, he'd only ground her until she was 18. Staring at the clock she only had half an hour before she was due at the hospital anyway.
Meanwhile, Ava had gotten herself into the club, and was making her way to the bar to see her friends. She saw Ethan, but that was it.
"Ethan, where is everybody?"
"I dunno, I think they've stitched us up. Do you want a drink?"
"Vodka and Coke please" She replied, Ethan got the drinks before they headed off to the dance floor. After a while Ethan went one side of the club, leaving Ava the other fending for herself. She met up with a cute guy who she was now dancing with, but she was also incredibly drunk. Their dancing had become rather erotic by this point. Ava was relying on him to hold her up, since that drink he made her have earlier, she had felt really out of it, dizzy and numb, she couldn't control her limbs.
"Come on babe, lets go somewhere private" Ava mumbled something in response, she couldn't hold herself up after drinking all that alcohol. Ava felt another person wrap their arms around her pulling her away from the man,
"Ava what the hell are you playing at?!" It was Zoe, she thought she recognised Ava, it wasn't until the guy was practically dragging her out of the club that she realised it was actually her. The guy ran off leaving Ava resting against Zoe,
"Sweetheart have you taken anything? You feel really hot" Zoe was becoming concerned about Ava who was paling and her pupils were becoming dilated.
"Mmm" Ava moaned in reply, feeling a lot safer with someone she knew.
"Come on lovely, lets get you back to mine to sober up, yeah?" Zoe wrapped her arm around Ava's waist and helped her to walk out of the club to wait for a taxi. While they were waiting for the taxi Zoe decided she was going to take Ava back to her flat, she needed to be monitored, Sam and Tom were both on night shifts so they wouldn't be home to look after Ava, she looked at the young girl in her arms. Why had she felt the need to go out and get herself so drunk, maybe there was something more going on.