hi i hope you like my version of the one piece story my story is like a combo of other fanfics and the orginal story and i will try to be as detailed in the fights as much as possible any ideas and help is appreciatedand
i dont own one piece i wish i did
chapter 1
My story starts out with luffy as a little kid with his brothers ace and sabo doing what they always did running around the forest fighting. They are trying to get stronger and one day the brothers are fighting each other trying to see who is stronger and they are worn out and suddenly this giant bear comes out of the woods and sees th le boys and thinks they will be his luch and attacks them and with mighty swipe knocks ace and sabo out against a tree and luffy is standing there with only a pole no devil fruit yet scared out of his mindso he throws his pole hits the bear in the head and it just pisses the bear off so before the bear can attack luffy starts crying and screams and just before the bear hits him luffy lets a wave of kings haki and knocks the bear out within inches of him and luffy stands confused why is the bear unconscious he says and runs and get his pole and hits the bear in the head many times to be sure and happy he won.
about 30 minutes later *
Ace and sabo wake up. They see this giant bear that luffy is trying to cook. They start to wonder how this bear that knocked them out is dead and luffy tells them that he beat them and they dont beileve him. So the eat the bear thinking luffy is still weak and no way he could of killed this bear since they are still able to beat him and for the next couple years life goes on for the brothers until ace and sabo have already left and luffy meets Shanks and luffy gets his rummerman devil fruit that is extremely rare. and when the moutain bandits tell to attack shanks luffy tries to attack their leader and fails terribly and they steal luffy which pisses shanks off so the bandits run. So in the streets Shanks is about to fight the bandits by himself and luffy screams because he is scared lets out another wave of kings haki and knocks out the mountain bandits and a few of Shanks crew. Shanks then notices luffy is alot stronger then he really is but decides to not take him with him cause he is too young but decides to give luffy his hat and telling him to return to me one day when your alot stronger. so Shanks leaves. with a happy yet crying luffy on the docks.
* about 3 months later *
luffy is training in the woods when his grandpa shows up to visit his grandson. Garp wants to test luffy to see if he got any stronger and Garp goes to punch luffy and luffy now knowing he has kings haki lets out it out to see if he can knock out his grandpa but all it does is knock out the small animals and birds nearby so now Garp sees this and decides to train luffy on how to use all three types of haki to make him a stronger marine. so Garp trains luffy for 2 years in all three forms of haki, battle strategy, and in many forms of combat. Now 2 years have passed and Garp tells luffy to keep praticing and become a great marine.
* couple years later *
Now luffy is getting ready to set sail on his big pirate adventure as strong as he was in marineford arc but with the training and knowledge of all the forms of haki and a genius fighter. Then a few minutes after he sets sail the sea king of the coast shows up and luffy looks at him uses armament haki and kills the beast in one punch to the head turns back to his hown town with a big smile on his face and leaves to become the next pirate king.
Now thats my first chapter in my next chapter i hope to introduce coby and zoro i hope you like it plz leave comments and reviews.