Chapter #1

Jay P.O.V.

I couldn't believe it. Zane was gone, taken by Nindroids. And we didn't do anything to try and stop them. Cole seemed calm and even on the outside, as he always did, but I could see the hurt and pain in his eyes. Kai on the other hand, well, he was bawling his eyes out, with Nya trying in vain to comfort him. As for me, I was trying my best to act like Cole, not only for everyone else's sake, but because it was what Zane would've wanted us to do. Zane. Just saying his name now stung like a bee, like the name of someone you would never see again.


10 minutes ago; 11:39 am

Zane P.O.V.

"Leave my friends alone!"

I could feel my brothers' gazes on me, but I didn't care. Cryptor began to chuckle, a cold, heartless, chuckle.

"Why should I, foolish ninja?" Cryptor sneered, staring behind me, towards my brothers.

For once, I had no answer. Suddenly, it all clicked together.

"Take me, then, if that is what you truly want, but leave my family alone!" I shouted as confidently as I could.

That took everyone by suprise. I could see the suprise on Cryptor's face. To my side, I could hear Cole attempt to break free from his Nindroid captors, all the while shouting his negative response, but was subdued and struck across the face for both attempting to escape and for speaking up.

"Very well, then," I could heard Cryptor say, and my world very suddenly, turned to black.


Well, that was the first chapter of Brothers Betrayed! If you spot any spelling/grammar mistakes, please let me know! Hopefully I'll be able to update every week or every other week but I may update sooner.

-Titan's Shadow