Welcome to my first story titled, The Lonely Warrior. This is a story through the eyes of Creampaw, as a threat arises and changes her life. Please read it, and reveiw. I'll need any help with my stories that you guys can offer.

The Lonely Warrior

"Creamkit," Mintstar's voice rang through Thunderclan's camp,"Until you have received your warrior name, you shall be known as Creampaw."

"Creampaw, Creampaw!" My name was shouted throught camp.

"Creampaw, your mentor is Shiverwing. Shiverwing, you had a great mentor in Applelight, and I trust that you will pass down your wisdom and skill to Creampaw. Clan dismissed!"

I leapt down to my mentor and she touched her nose to mine. "Training will start in the morning, why don't you have some fresh kill and head over to the apprentice den?"

I grabbed a juicy looking vole and padded over to the apprentice's den. "Isn't it exciting? Doveflight promised me that I could learn to hunt tomorrow after seeing the territory!" My sister Lionpaw jumped up and down. "I bet we have the best mentors in all of Thunderclan! And you're so lucky! You have the deputy!"

"Yeah, well your mentor trained Mintstar!"

"And if you two don't shut up, I'll come over there and make you!" Badgerpaw growled

Lionpaw rolled her eyes. "Goodnight Creampaw!"

"Goodnight." I mumbled before closing my eyes. When I opened them, I was in a strange place. Everywhere was white and… ghostly. I kept looking around, and then I saw another cat. A white tom with ginger stripes… just like me. "B-Barktail?" I gasped at the sight of my father. He nodded."Why are you here? I thought Starclan only spoke to the leaders and medicine cats?"

"Sharp as thorns and evil as a badger, darkness will come."

"W-What do you mean? What are you saying?"

"A death will happen, one that shouldn't."

"Wait, whose going to die?! Tell me!"

Barktail faded away and I woke up in the medicine cat's den.

Sorry if the warning/prophecy isn't what you'd except in a warriors story, but I'm not that good at them. Please tell me what you think of whats happening so far. Do you like Creampaw?