okay, so, to make it clear, i'm 15, indonesian, with no english literature education in all my life.

i only learn basic english at school and through books.

so please, please forgive me if it turns out to be awful.

someone please teach me english :(

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"Wake up. Breakfast's ready!"

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May be blessed the masculine voice

For its tune shut the fairest noise

Of the merry dawn's perfect sober

Belongs to but the tranquil slumber

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May I wonder what this day owns

Beside the gay and prim lasses' crowns

And slate and limes of temptation

Lunches but the succulent ones, Hannah's creation

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Thy know nothing, only those before thee

Scarlet on my back, yes it brings dread to me

Noses up in the air at the glance of red ink

Gossips float as they look at this grubby dressing

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Sketches of the beloved shall be my refugee

Potteries on my lap as I portray thee

This little goose, what thy make me become

May thy let her dream with silk and friends to come

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yes, it's amy's.

if you think it's still forgivable, i'll try to make more of them.

so please, tell me what you think, kay?

hugs and kisses to everyone :)