This is just a short poem I wrote during english today, I was so bored! Tell me what you think.
Dripping in sorrow
Drenched in pain
Feeling black
Eating the rain
My body torn
Soul ripped in two
Lips feather softly
Silken and dewed
Thunder and lightning
Earth mingles with death
A flower broken
Gone in a breath
So? I want you to review and tell me who you think this poem was about. If I get enough reviews, I'll post what the poem was all about and who it focused on and all that peachy-grand stuff ^_^ So, review please!