This my rewrite of Love's Flame I hope you all like it.
Jackie and Amy were childhood friends they grew up together. Jackie: Hey Amy. Amy: Hey Jackie. Amy Jackie what happened? Jackie Jeff hit me. Amy Oh my god how long has this been going on.? Jackie A month. Amy What a dick. Jackie You don t know the half of it. Amy gave Jackie a hug then Amy ordered two drinks for them.
While the girls were talking a dark figure was standing in the corner by the bar watching them.
The dark figure had icy blue eyes,long black hair that was clipped back in ponytail, he was warring black. And he had a thick Romanian accent.
He had his eyes on Jackie who by now was crying because her boyfriend was hitting her.
Jackie Amy I m going to get another drink, do you want another one.? Amy Yes please?
Jackie got up and walked up to the bar.
Jackie ordered a beer for herself and a Pepsi for Amy. While she was getting the drinks she spotted the dark figure looking at her. She winked at him then she walked back to the table with the drinks.
After Jackie and Amy finished their drinks they left the bar. And went to their separate homes. Once Jackie got home Jeff was waiting for her.
Jeff Where were you? Jackie I was out with Amy what s it to you? Jeff stepped right in front of Jackie then he grabbed her arm and started to squeeze really hard. Jackie Let go of me Jeff." Jeff Don t smart mouth me. Jackie Let go of me. Jeffbegan to punch Jackie then he kicked her in the stomach. After a while he started beating on her really bad.
Jackie ended up in the hospital.
Amy Jackie , Jackie wake up. Jackie Amy what happened where am i? Amy Jeff beat you up and you are in the hospital. Jackie started moving and groaning. Jackie Ow. Amy Are you okay? Jackie Yeah I m fine just a little pain in my stomach. Amy Oh you poor thing.
Jackie What happened to Jeff? Amy I called the cops. Jackie Thank you Amy. Amy Your welcome Jackie. Jackie Jeff killed our baby. Amy What? Jackie I was pregnant with our first child and he kicked me in the stomach this happened a month ago. Amy I will kill him.
Jackie You won t have to he will die in jail. Amy What will you do now? Jackie I don t know I am going to hunt for someone new. Amy Well good luck. Jackie Thank you Amy. Amy Your welcome Jackie
Jackie and Amy sat in Jackie s hospital room . While the girls were talking the dark figure was watching them talk.
He was falling for Jackie.