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Ozelie Chapter 1- Nightmares Kagomes Dream
I want to protect you, please, you're the one I love, and no one else pleaded Inuyasha. Oh Inuyasha, for so long I have been waiting to hear you say those words snarled Kikyo in a "like I could care less" tone.
As Kagome was watching them in the forest, she felt betrayed, like she had lost something that was never really hers. But then, she heard a loud yell of pain. It was Inuyasha, Kikyo had shot him with her sacred arrows and pinned him to the time tree. Without knowing she said Inuyasha's name. Kikyo shot up and looked around noticing Kagome standing by a tree. She told her to come. Suddenly without any control over her body Kagome started to move forward toward her.
Next thing she knew she was face to face with her reincarnation. She looked at her, circling her, she then spoke. Do you know what you are child? Kikyo said in a harsh voice. Scared of what she should or was supposed to say she didn't answer and just stared ahead, trying to seem unafraid. Kikyo looked at her and growled... little...brat. Your just a worthless little shit you know that.
You're just a pathetic jewel detector. Inuyasha doesn't really need you; he's just using you. Your stupid existence is just a lie, you have no purpose. Once your finished collecting those shards, I'll take the jewel, my soul, and Inuyasha as well, just wait, you'll see. The truth will come soon enough. Until then.... Run, run and never come back! Go back to your own time; it's were you belong!
End of dream
Kagomes eyes shot open, she could not stand to hear those words again. Run, run and never come back...Jewel detector, worthless... She just couldn't take it. She went out side to get some fresh air. Little did she know Inuyasha had smelled her scent and followed her outside to the lake by Kaede's house.
Hey, he said making her spazz out and flinch. Oh it's only you she sadly replied. What? Who were you expecting? He said sarcastically. No one, you just scared me a little that's all. He sat down beside her and stared at her.
What? She asked. Nothing you just seem really down, what's wrong. She hesitated for a moment, Inuyasha? Concerned? She didn't know if she should tell him her dream. What? No way he actually looks like he's worried about me? She thought. Maybe I should tell him. I mean, what could it hurt right? .........ME THAT'S WHAT!!!
She sighed as Inuyasha blankly stared at her, totally lost in her misguided gaze. She had to tell him, she just had too. I need to tell you something she said in a low voice. What? He asked. Well it's about Kikyo. With that she knew she had gotten his full attention.
So, first chapter....WELL!!!!! Sorry.......hehe... I hope you like it I'm still working on the rest of it. PLEASE REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!! I promise I'll update it soon! Till then
Ozelie
Ozelie Chapter 1- Nightmares Kagomes Dream
I want to protect you, please, you're the one I love, and no one else pleaded Inuyasha. Oh Inuyasha, for so long I have been waiting to hear you say those words snarled Kikyo in a "like I could care less" tone.
As Kagome was watching them in the forest, she felt betrayed, like she had lost something that was never really hers. But then, she heard a loud yell of pain. It was Inuyasha, Kikyo had shot him with her sacred arrows and pinned him to the time tree. Without knowing she said Inuyasha's name. Kikyo shot up and looked around noticing Kagome standing by a tree. She told her to come. Suddenly without any control over her body Kagome started to move forward toward her.
Next thing she knew she was face to face with her reincarnation. She looked at her, circling her, she then spoke. Do you know what you are child? Kikyo said in a harsh voice. Scared of what she should or was supposed to say she didn't answer and just stared ahead, trying to seem unafraid. Kikyo looked at her and growled... little...brat. Your just a worthless little shit you know that.
You're just a pathetic jewel detector. Inuyasha doesn't really need you; he's just using you. Your stupid existence is just a lie, you have no purpose. Once your finished collecting those shards, I'll take the jewel, my soul, and Inuyasha as well, just wait, you'll see. The truth will come soon enough. Until then.... Run, run and never come back! Go back to your own time; it's were you belong!
End of dream
Kagomes eyes shot open, she could not stand to hear those words again. Run, run and never come back...Jewel detector, worthless... She just couldn't take it. She went out side to get some fresh air. Little did she know Inuyasha had smelled her scent and followed her outside to the lake by Kaede's house.
Hey, he said making her spazz out and flinch. Oh it's only you she sadly replied. What? Who were you expecting? He said sarcastically. No one, you just scared me a little that's all. He sat down beside her and stared at her.
What? She asked. Nothing you just seem really down, what's wrong. She hesitated for a moment, Inuyasha? Concerned? She didn't know if she should tell him her dream. What? No way he actually looks like he's worried about me? She thought. Maybe I should tell him. I mean, what could it hurt right? .........ME THAT'S WHAT!!!
She sighed as Inuyasha blankly stared at her, totally lost in her misguided gaze. She had to tell him, she just had too. I need to tell you something she said in a low voice. What? He asked. Well it's about Kikyo. With that she knew she had gotten his full attention.
So, first chapter....WELL!!!!! Sorry.......hehe... I hope you like it I'm still working on the rest of it. PLEASE REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!! I promise I'll update it soon! Till then
Ozelie