Author's Note: This is my first story so I'd like some feedback on what you think. I'd like positive reviews, no flame. Also tell me if I need to make the chapters longer.
Chapter 1
The sands twisted and turned forever into the endless desert of the Soul Society. Ryuukei, leader of the Exiles, stood on the dune with a fierce determined look in his eyes. Behind him, five other banished warriors waited for his orders. These five beings were, Inase Otaku, Naomi Tazuma, Jasmine Rippuku, Hayai Suihou, and Hissori Tejina. Naomi approached him, she was a Quincy and second in command of the Exiles. "What do we do now sir?" she asked, "The Soul Society is not far from here." "We're not going to the Soul Society, at least not yet anyway," Ryuukei said, "I need to find something out first." Ryuukei pull out an ancient looking compass, studied the direction for a moment, "We go south," he said. "And what exactly do we need to find out?" said Jasmine in a fuming way, she was a Bount and lead hothead of the group. "All we need to do is barge in the Soul Society and kick some ass!" she said. "And how do plan to do that while the Seireitei is still protected by the energy shield?" Ryuukei said sarcastically, "you need to learn to control your temper Jasmine." She became silent once again. "Now let's be on our way, shall we?" Ryuukei said. The sun was high and there was a lot to be done.
Ryuukei was a Soul Reaper that had been banished from the Soul Society. He had short black hair that stuck straight up in spikes. He was young, with a look of a child that was fading out and giving him a more distinct look. He and the rest of the Exiles wore desert coats, concealing there other clothes. Ryuukei was banished because of a reason he wished nobody to know of.
The Exiles walked farther and farther into the desert until they came to what they had been looking for. In front of them, a giant blackish bluish wall stood. The height was immeasurable, and it went on forever on both sides. "What is it?" Inase asked. He was a banished Soul Reaper like Ryuukei, only he had the brains of a super computer. But for all the knowledge Inase had, he was dumb founded at the sight of the structure before him. "Never thought I'd hear those words come out of your mouth, Inase," said Hayai. Hayai was also a banished Soul Reaper, he was a pretty boy but with an evil heart. "So what are we doing here 'o gracious leader?" he said sarcastically. "You'll find out soon enough," Ryuukei said. He walked up to the wall and studied it, Inase close behind. "It's not made of reishi, then what is it?" Inase said with utter fascination. "This, my friends, is a barrier," Ryuukei said, "A barrier leading to the world of the Hollows, Hueco Mundo. A shock was sent through the whole group. "Hueco Mundo! How can that be!" exclaimed Jasmine. "Let me explain," Ryuukei said.
"Hueco Mundo and the Soul Society were once one world, like a positive and negative side of a battery. The Soul Society was the positive, and Hueco Mundo was the negative. Hollows would be born in Hueco Mundo then make their way into the Soul Society and wreak havoc. So the captains of the thirteen court guard squads at that time made a decision, to block off the border between lands. But this task killed all thirteen captains to accomplish. And as the decades went by, souls and Soul Reapers alike forgot about the Wall. Eventually Hollows figured out a means of transporting to different places, but the Wall still keeps some of the most powerful hollows out."
"So you're telling us that Hueco Mundo and the Soul Society are on one world?" Jasmine asked. "Exactly," Ryuukei replied, "and if the legend is true then only one person can break down that wall." "Who's that?" Naomi asked. "Me," said Ryuukei. He then walked up to the wall, drew his zanpaktou and slashed at the wall leaving a large gash in it. The wall then started to recover from the gash by closing up, but before it could finish Ryuukei jumped up and stabbed the closing gash. The wall stopped healing and a small piece crumbled away, big enough for a large person to fit. As Ryuukei fell back down he re-sheathed his sword.
"Too easy," said Ryuukei. "How did you know you could do that?" asked Inase. "Or better yet why?" asked Hayai. "Now, just in case my plan fails, there will be another wave of attack," Ryuukei said, "and that is all you need to know for now. Now it's time to return to the Soul Society, to get vengeance for whatever our reason. Just then a giant Hollow worm came out of the hole in the Wall and quicker than lightning, ate Inase. The worm thrashed around and just as quickly as it had come, had left.
"Inase!" screamed Naomi. "Damn!" said Ryuukei. Then Hissori, an Arrancar who never spoke, began to run towards the hole. But Ryuukei stopped him, "No, it's too late for him," he said. Hissori stepped back and took no other actions. His face was hidden under a hood to disguise his mask, though every one of the Exiles knew exactly what he was. "Let's keep moving," said Ryuukei, "We don't have time to mourn his untimely destruction." And so, the Exiles moved out into the sands of the Soul Society.