Hey new readers that may have come here to check this out~ Just a quick warning that this was my first fic and I do plan on re-witting it (as it has been discontinued) to be, hopefully better haha, but if you do want to carry on reading, I advice you skip to chapter one since I feel that the prologue is pretty much unneeded. :S
If you review this with ideas on how I could improve, I'd be very grateful in the long run! :D
Thanks in advance :)
Prologue-
The Void:
A dark, hazardous, beautiful place, home to thousands upon thousands of souls.
But not all were from the dead as it may seem- No. Some were born here... In the pit of darkness.
Waiting.
Waiting for the day they would become alive...
Hm. Sounds too easy doesn't it? An easy existence I mean. Heh, maybe it was- I don't know and didn't really care. All I knew was that the "Mother" chose me to be the next sent to Earth. To find a book.
Yep. A book.
Laughable I understand, but the award was what the others loathed.
Becoming Human.
Alive. Living. Breathing.
This in turn, scared me.
Strange isn't it? A creature of darkness, scared?
It was breath-taking though. Being able to talk, move, laugh- the possibilities where endless.
My own body... That was adapted to me...
Don't get me wrong, I was only sent to Earth to track some book that others failed to find... But the award was oh so gold. Literally in some ways.
Gold eyes, for example!
Well, 'eye' to be more specific. The right ones job was to track the book and BOY did it stand out.
Metallically specked and glistening; it had its hint of bronze, but no other human as I could tell would accept the oddness of my eyes.
But I digress; being a 'new-human' from a dark void has its disadvantages- BIG disadvantages.
It wasn't the fact I looked like a dead Goth. Nor that I was an evil parasite to Earth. To be honest, it wasn't even about me being human. That in itself was perfect… It was something that I find mostly stereotypical in the whole demon lifestyle.
The perfection of my life, had to go sooner than later.
Well hey guys, as you can see this is my first fanfiction here for now. :D I know it was short but the first chapter is only a small introduction/prologue so please excuse that. xD
The story itself however, will probably be written in third-person view... if you want me to revert back to talking in First person, just ask in the reviews :D
I'd really appreciate reviews on this! Thanks for reading if you did!~
