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(I apologize since now, English is not my native language but I tried)
A date under the rain
Edward was sitting next to me, his arms around me.
—Will you consider, then, go on a real date with me? I don't remember when was the last time that we go out, just you and me.
—You're a vampire. —I told him, really serious. —You can't forget.
—It is true. —He gave me a playful smile and that made me suspect more of him. —I recall it perfectly. —He leaned forward and his breath tickled my neck. —It was the night I bit you. —He touched the almost invisible scar that his fangs made me. A shiver of pleasure went through me just by remember it.
—Fine. —I said breathlessly. —You win.
I got up and gave him a quick kiss on the cheek. I started walking and I felt him staring at me.
—Where are you going? —He asked me puzzled from where he was.
—To get ready. I will see you tonight. —It was obvious. I couldn't go on a date with the handsomest man of the planet dressing like this.
I astonished him so much that he didn't know who to answer. That was new. I turned around and walked away. Then, I took my phone and dialed the number.
—Leah, I need your help.
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I was in my bedroom watching TV, Leah had just left. She did my makeup and my hair. I looked myself in the mirror and I couldn´t take my eyes off of the reflection. I wore a skirt and a blouse that let quite visible my shoulders and neck. But, the worse were the heels; they even were really high never the less I could tell that I was going to trip.
I heard someone knocking on the door and Charlie called me. I went down the stairs as fast as I could with those horrible shoes. I hurried and took my bag. My dad was taking a beer out of the fridge and then he watched me cautiously and raised an eyebrow.
—I put a pepper spray in your purse. —He added and looked severe.
—Thanks. —I kissed him on the cheek and smiled looking as innocent as I could manage. My father wasn't happy with my chose of clothes.
Edward was waiting for me in the doorway. He was wearing a dark blue jacket, black jeans and shirt. My heartbeats begin to rise so I tried not to blush… or stare so hard at him. Proudly, he smiled at me. He could hear better than I did how my heart was pounding. He turned on the engine. Edward looked at me and I noticed a little sharpness in his eyes.
—Don't you trust me?
—Of course I do. —I replied bewildered.
—So, why are you so happy at bringing a pepper spray with you? —He asked carefully.
—I have bad luck. It's better being ready. —I told him casually. —The pepper spray isn't the only thing I brought. —I winked at him and he chuckle. I sighed relieved aware of the cold metal from the sharp knife in my leg.
The restaurant was decorated with twinkling lights. It appeared to be stylish, knowing my vampire it was. We were standing on a line waiting for our table. Edward was close to me, holding my hand. I glanced carefully in front of me and when just one couple was before us I took my boyfriend from the neck and kissed him. I felt blissful when he kissed me back straight away and very enthusiastically. I realized that the waitress saw us. Finally, we pulled apart. Edward gave a complicity look and turned to say his name. The woman looked stunned and was acting a bit clumsy. I know being close to Edward had that effect. My gentlemanlike boyfriend held the chair for me and I sat down. I was unable to hide my satisfaction seeing how my vampire wasn't paying any attention to the woman who was trying to hook up with him. She walked off and Edward attempted to suppress a laughter.
—You did that on purpose. —He accused me.
—I did. —I assured him without regret. —It wasn't like you mind. —I shrugged.
He leaned forward and gently brought my face closer to his. He looked straight to my eyes and then he gave me one deep long kiss. I was about to complain when he pull apart but I noticed the waitress standing next to us with the menus in her hand and her mouth slightly open. She woke up after a few seconds and lend us the menus saying nothing. Like it was usual Edward only paid attention to me.
That's for now, if you want to read more you know what to do ;)
22 Enero 2013
crazy-shy-izel
