Just my slut
Well, this is my new fic. I'll tell you the story.
Jude is 17. she works like a waitress in a fanciest brothel of town.
Tommy is 24. he is a rich man and owns a cellphone company. Kwest is his best friend and is married with Sadie. Sadie and Jude are not relatives.
Charlotte is Tommy's fiancée. She only thinks in shopping, parties and of course, her boyfriend.
Chapter 1: wanna go with me?
Tommy POV
Kwest: c'mon man, let's go.
Tommy: I don't know if I wanna go Kwest. This day was bad, but I don't like that kind of places.
Kwest: a bad day?, man your life is perfect. Just because you had a fight with your horrible girlfriend doesn't mean the day was bad.
Tommy: I know, but I don't think that a lot of girls wanting me for my money are going to make my day.
Kwest: believe me, when you meet Maritza your day is done.
Tommy and Kwest got into the car.
Tommy: and, who's that Maritza?
Kwest grinned.
Kwest: is the best in town. She can make you forget everything. That's what the people say, because I had never been with her
Tommy laughed
Tommy: of course not, you have a girlfriend.
Kwest looked at Tommy.
Kwest: well you have a girlfriend too and Maritza is going to be with you tonight.
Tommy shocked.
Tommy: what??!!
Kwest smiled evilly and looked at him.
Tommy: Kwest, I can't. I have a girlfriend
Kwest: you can't back up Tom, we're here. Now, let's the fun begin.
I went before him, but I wasn't sure about doing something with a girl that was touched for thousands of guys before. I always liked things new, not used by anyone. But something said me that this was the exception.
The place was amazing. At first, I thought it was a discotheque, but when I saw the rooms in the second floor I realize that what Kwest said was truth. This was the hottest brothel in town. We went to the bar.
Tommy: I'm not sure about this Kwest. I mean, I have a girlfriend and I'm going to get married with her.
Kwest: but you had been with her since you have, what, eight? You have to know, how can I say it?...more bodies.
Kwest smiled and then asked for a drink for me and him.
Tommy: well, I don't even know Charlotte's body…
Kwest dropped his drink and looked at me, shocked.
Kwest: what?!...so you are…
Tommy: keep it down Kwest!
Kwest: this is incredible. I can't believe it. But I'm going to change that.
The barman looked at us, and Kwest called him.
Kwest: hey, Lu. Is Maritza upstairs?
Lu looked at Kwest, and then at me.
Lu: I don't know, you know here, the girl came downstairs when they want to…you know…work. But, why don't you go to look?
Kwest nodded and then looked at me.
Kwest: let's go.
Tommy: what?!
Kwest: you heard Lu. We have to go upstairs.
I rolled my eyes and followed him.
Tommy: why don't you go with her?. I don't know if I want to do this.
Kwest stopped in front of a door and turned back.
Kwest: because I have Sadie, I don't have to be with anyone else. But you, man, you're virgin. Now get in that room and make me feel proud of you.
Tommy: I don't know…
Kwest: c'mon, Charlotte will never know about this.
Tommy hesitated but then knocked at the door.
Jude's POV
I'm just a waitress…why do I have to be the nanny of those slut up there?
Lu: hey Jude…
He laughed. Jude rolled her eyes.
Lu: I want you to go to Maritza's room to clean it. And look what is she doing too
Jude: ok, I'll go.
Lu: when are you going to accept my proposal?. You could be upstairs, making real money and not here. Just think about it, when you turn 18, I can make you a star.
I didn't respond. I just went upstairs and entered in the room. Maritza was the most wanted girl in the place. She was fighting with a guy. They guy opened the door and ran away. Maritza looked at me with sad eyes.
Maritza: please tell Lu I won't work tonight.
I nodded as she ran before the guy.
I started to clean the disaster that the girl had in the room. I was cleaning the closet, when I was some pink lingerie. It was beautiful, I had to admit it. Impulsively, I took the clothes, if you could name them like that, and put them on. I looked myself in the mirror. Omg, I look like a slut. I put some make up on and then untied my hair. Not I was a slut like the word said. How does this girls don't get a cold?
I was about to dress myself again, when somebody knocked the door.
I was nervous and couldn't think in anything, so opened the door. There was, looking at me with fear the most wonderful guy I have seen in my life. He had ocean blue eyes and a smile…wow, that smile. I could notice that he was shocked too, looking at me, and not exactly looking my face.
Jude: hey, what do you want?
Tommy: you…are…Ma...ritza?
I didn't know what to say. Well, I looked like Maritza, but I wasn't her at all. Besides, I knew what he wanted with Maritza and I had never done that before. but if Lu knew that I was upstairs playing at "the slut" we would fire me.
Jude: hi, I'm Maritza…and you are…?
The guy was nervous, I could feel it.
Tommy: I'm Tom, Tom Quincy. But you can call me Tommy.
We both laughed
Tommy: so, you wanna go with me? I don't like this kind of places
I was shocked. I needed the money, but I don't do this kind of things. Well, he seems nice and maybe he just wants to talk with me. But if he wants something else. What should I do?
Ok…first chapter…please post and comment!
