Okay, so this is my first fan fiction so please be nice, um, constructive critism or really nice reviews wanted.

Chapter 1

Marian the mousemaid was drifting out to sea. Her front paws were bound and a nasty wound was on the back of her head. She looked around for the accursed ship that threw her out in the middle of nowhere to die. She only saw one face that she wanted revenge on, Garou the fearsome!

Flashback:

" Buckear, this slave is no longer fit in rowing. Dispose of her." Captain Garou

" Aye, aye milord. Comon you lousy excuse for a slave!" Buckear said as he grabbed her arm.

" Let me go! I swear on my mother's grave, ill get my revenge. Let me go!" Marian said as she was facing the captain, trying to hit him wildly with her closed fists.

Buckear tied her paws together with a strong rope, but had to dodge every once in a while because she would try to bite him as hard as she could. Finally Buckear had enough and hit the back of her head with a pole. She fell onto the deck unconscious.

They picked her up and threw her into the sea and laughed wickedly.

" Har har now lets get this ship going! To your station Buckear. Haha, have fun with the sharks you little slave!" Garou said laughing wickedly.

End of flashback.

Marians eyes snapped open and she tried to swim, but was floundering to stay on top of the water.

She knew this was the end. She was out in freezing water that had fishes that could eat her whole. Yes she knew that this was the end.

Okay, i know it was short..but the chapters will get longer i promis you that. Let me know if i should continue or not so please review

Thanks,phantom lova