Author's Note!!!
All right, first, thanks everyone for reviewing! I could just hear that little spark of positiveness amongst all the needs for improvement! The changes have been made! New names!!
Tyath Tybir
Klath Wyan
Rawin Rawineth (I had wondered why it sounded funny…)
Thanks for all the help, kids! Enjoy, and let me know if anything else needs fixing!
-Jes
